Hello can't wait for the first time I'm saisasu see how it goes, great job

So, Naruto likes Sakura, Sakura likes Sasuke, Sasuke is starting to like Sai, and Sai likes Naruto.

At the moment, NaruSaku and SaiSasu are the only two pairings that make sense. Sasuke and Sai are both gay and kind of about to have a date, while straight!Naruto and straight!Sakura are comforting each other at the hospital. (The fact that neither of them thought to message Sasuke and Sai about what happened with Neji is telling.)

I like how you're writing Sakura, Sai, and Sasuke. Surprisingly, I don't find Sakura annoying the way I normally would. I'm actually sympathetic to her one-sided crush, mainly because she's not trying to force herself on Sasuke the way she did in canon. Naruto is the only one of the four I don't care for. You aren't writing him badly, it's just his personality type that I don't like. He's simple-minded and not as self-aware as the other three MCs.

This was awesome. Too bad irs abandoned. I liked it :)

I hope you will update more frequently,, huhu.. So far i'm interested in the story, but i think i haven't seen the entanglement so far... . i'll be waiting for your updates! :D

Please update the story soon. I really want to know what will happen next between the four of them...XD

What the what?! What just happened?! Seriously Sasuke?! That's the weirdest thing to happen so far!

What th-
did tha-
holy hel-
*spits out water*
Whoa, how did that happen? Did that shock anyone else as much as it did me?
How's it gonna be now? Just- WHUT.
Update please.

I really hope both Sai and Sasuke are going to fight for Naruto. I love SasuNaru well most Naruto fiction fan's are SasuNaru lovers I hope this story will be SasuNaru please update soon.

Interesting.
I think I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Please tell me they fight over Naruto!
Please please please!

Update! XD

A bit short, but I'm intrigued. I'll definitely be checking back for updates :-)

Interesting indeed. Haha nice start!

More please