Hi
I really liked ur story and was wondering if there is a sequel or sth coz in one of the chapters Yuki mentioned Sara and her “pet”

I'm just a little mad that ichiru reacted that way I mean he should now how it fells to think your sibling was dead your not gonna be like ok your alive now everything can go back to normal that's not how it works questions will be asked and in kanames case fights will be had yukis chooses are her own no one else's its not kanames fault that his uncle was a dickwad and messed up his sisters mind... Ok I digress

words can not describe how amazing and awesome your story is
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btw I've read it like 5 times or maybe more

Oh dear, I totally forgot about that "new chapter" alert that came to my mail about this last chapter! O_O I'm such an idiot! xD

But anyway! Loved this little chappy even though it was so short. But hey, I think that's alright and that it's just the way it is supposed to be *nods* It was really funny reading it and some parts made me TOTALLY laugh my ass off (with all the lovely innuendos and all ;D )

All in all, you did great and I hope to read more Kaname-sama x Zero-chan deliciousness from you ;3

Thank you for all your hard work! :D

Yay for Zero-chan finally waking up and being healthy! *nods*

Muffufu. . .x3 Aaand I LOOOOVED seeing Kaname-sama so regretful and guilty over what happened x9 That's just the way it has to be! Especially considering how much pain and misery he caused poor Zerorin *huffs* Glad that Ichiru gave him a hard time there *Muwahhaha!*

But anyway! All well that ends well, and I'm really happy that our dear boys are together again *nods* I ADORED all the lovely Kaname-sama&Zero-chan sweet luff and passion moments and definitely hope to see some more of those! *_*

Good job as always, deary! Looking forward to the next update! :D

Awwwwwwwww ilove this paring in this context!

Really enjoyed the plot line was kinda a little upset that there were no scenes. Even though the rating was M.. but ita okay! Thank you for writing it! XD

I loved your story and also reading all your fun comments and authors notes. The plot definitely gets a five star review from me and even though your characters were mostly ooc, I loved all their personalities too, almost more than the original if not just as much.

However I would have to agree with reviewers who say this story seems a little rushed. It would be nice if, some day in the future, you can elaborate on the plot a little more and maybe just bulk out the little details more. I'd also like to see a little of Yagari and cross' relationship thrown in there, what their views on the students and their relationships are, if they are aware or partially aware of the situation in the school and maybe a few intimate moments.

The ending id definitely the most rushed. I can just picture Kaname shuffling around on his knees after Ichiru, begging for forgiveness, just the thought makes me chuckle. So maybe if you do a re-write just add a few chapters at the end to show how Kaname begged for forgiveness from both Ichi and Zero. Lastly I was hoping to see more KaZe loving, so if I could request either adding to this or writing a sequel if you're up for it to show the progression of their relationship and the proposal, I am dying to read how the proposal went. Proposals are always so romantic and tear jerking moments.

Whew this was a long review, well I guess thats what you get when you only review at the end of a story lol. Anyways, hope my suggestions give you some inspiration or at least help in some way. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Luvs yooouu! Ja ne! xxxxx

A happy ending for everyone! You made a great storyy! No the greatest story ever! XD

So what are you going to do now? In terms of stories I mean.

Love your story! Looking forward fir your new vk fiction. :)

well
hope to see your new story soon
bleach-fem ichigo?

aww i was hoping for more story...but loved the ending none the less...it was cute especially maria's announcement lol...and kaname was cute with the photos

nice how understanding maria is even after she got attacked...but damn zero's two sides merged together?! cool!

it was perfect ending everyone had happiest ever, it was kinder cute that maria and ichiru together in the, thank for great story and keep up the great work, cya until next time :)