crying thank you

I really enjoyed rereading this story. You not only showed the different sides that made up Penny. But you also opened the eyes of the others and made each of them a better and more understanding person. It also made each of them take a good look at themselves. I loved what Penny said to Leonard and wasn't surprised that the whole group didn't seem to miss Leonard from their lives. I also loved that Ortiz was the real Leonard and sided with the rest of the group

So glad for the ending. Interesting interactions between the various Pennys and the gang.

another wonderful story. even with the limited paramaters you allowed yourself you still touch my heart. thanks so much

You scared me there!

Loved the creative approach for this story. I tried to guess what the words were in some chapters. I think 2/5 was my highest score? :)
Anyways, very enjoyable read. I wish there were more stories like this out there :)

Ok, a bit quick on that last part. But you did wrap it up very nicely. I don't know how you could have done it any other way.

A very good story, unique idea. That says a lot right there!

If I may; you may really want to work on this and flesh it out. Of course then it might be TOO long for people to read and enjoy.

Good idea, good story. Solid.

Rate: A

Excellent explanation of what Leonard is PERFECT! But a punch to the nuts would have been the icing on the cake and maybe to emphasize this wake up call.

Rate: A

After 26 chapters, here is where I hope Leonard gets it good.

Interesting premise. Short chapters, but each are well done. You could turn this idea into a novel length book, the size of War and Peace I am sure.

I also like the idea of you using 5 new words in your chapters.

Well done!

Rate: A

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