I love this story! Please continue I have been following this for over 2 and a half years

Holy cANOLI! THIS IS AMAZINGSKDKSKD

WHAT A CLIFFHANGER

I commend you author. I also love you. Very much. This whole story, this WORLD, is a masterpiece. You deserve a pat on the back and a million cookies!

THIS IS SUCH AN INCREDIBLE STORY! I love it so far and I pray you keep it going till the very end. I got so into this story I didn't want to stop and take any breaks. You're doing awesome!

I literally had to make an account in order to leave this review. Please update this more regularly! I love each one and cannot wait to read more. If you need any help with editing, just shoot me a message and let me know.

Can't wait for the next chapter, I must know what happens next! O-O

This chapter. This chapter right here is cathartic. I loved it.

Yeppers, I died. You killed me. From Guinevere's motherfricking idiocy to Jack finding Flee dead and the Guardians seeing all that... Just take me out of my misery XD. Fr tho, just some things I want to comment on

1) Jack honestly IS a walking ball of anxiety, but can you blame him? He was forced to kill his parents because of a stupid entity haunting him. Then, he had to be on the run for years cuz of "his" crimes. Idk about you, but I'm shook he can hide that constant tension as well as he does.

2) You're right about me hating Guinevere. She is a complete bastard who doesn't deserve our poor Jackie. She did dodge an arrow, but that's my arrow not Jack's . Ugh, I get it that nobody knows what truly happened, but like can't SOMEONE fricking ask him for his story?

3) Dear God, ofc the Guardians finally connect the dots after Jack goes to Flee's death bed. Just fricking COURSE! I will say that I did particularly enjoy Shadowbent"s casual af warning. Although, now I'm particularly worried Pitch had been in the room this whole time... Or at least the shadows attacking them all. I mean, this whole thing WREAKS a trap xDD

4) I refuse to believe Flee just died when Jack comes to see her. She's either been dead this whole time as Pitch "mourned" for her health, or she's not dead. I want to just believe she's in a coma, okay? LET ME BELIEVE PLZZZ

5) The confrontations are gonna get real xD Good or horrible, idk lmao.

I think you should write more , when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

oh no... everything fell apart... NOOOOO

I love the house scamander! I'm really loving this story and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. I'm loving it.

I think you should write more , when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

This. Is. Where. Jack. Is. Effing. Useful. IMA be honest, Bunny...you screwed yourself up. At least y'all know where Jack is, and if their dense heads (North and Bunny's. Sandy is gucci) don't connect the dots, I swear they're worse than Proudwind. I swear tho, I love how Shadowbent is exteriorly going "I hate you, Frost" but internally is just like "I NEED TO MAKE YOUR ENEMIES SUFFER". That's just a whole mood!

Also, please tell me the Guardians search for Jack. Better yet, Nightlight convinces Jack to go back to his friends lol. I mean, that Spectral Boy should realize by now that JACK NEEDS AN EFFING FRIEND! What better than ones that chase him cuz they care for him.

I also have some opinions on this ball for Flee. That, and on a bunch of other shiz lol.

I think you should write more when you can, as it is really good so for,please and thank you.

1) Can I slap Jack?
2) When's Nightlight gonna break it to him?
3) Can I slap Shadowbent?

Wow, look at that. Another fcking hurricane of emotions from me, but that's expected since your fanfic is like a legit novel! Once again, it sucks that I have to filter whatever I say cuz I know more than I should, but OH GOD NIGHTLIGHT AND JACK FINALLY REUNITE! I'M ACTUALLY SHAKING RN CUZ I WAS SO SCARED THEY'D SEE EACH OTHER IN A DUNGEON!

Fr tho Jack, I highly doubt they'd try to ransom you or some other bs that you're worried about. They genuinely love you as one of their own in that weird band of misfits. I mean, I get the fear and it's completely accepted, but I WANT TO PHYSICALLY FIGHT YOU RN! Like, stop being such a blowhard (like me) and actually FACE the problem instead of fleeing. You ALWAYS DO DIS MAN! It's actually really beneficial if you stop running when you get that fight or flight reflex and actually fight. I mean, that's gonna happen with where you're heading...

Ah tho, the plot is finally accelerating! What'd be the top of the sundae is if North and the others catch up to them hugging xD PURE DRAMA GONNA UNFOLD THEN! Just, Jack's Royal family meeting Jack's Misfit family (that he doesn't accept exists but does). I can imagine the tears and horror and angst that's gonna happen.

Why do I love this fanfic again? Like why? XD Past, you know, killing me with feels.

Soooo goood!
Please continue if u can, it's written awesomely and has such an unique plot! I'l definitely be checking up for updates! Great job.

God this is so beautiful.