Reviews for Initiation
Lily chapter 12 . 3/3/2018
This was really interesting and fun to read! :)
Lily chapter 1 . 3/3/2018
This is interesting
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 12 . 8/4/2017
Oooooooo this is so good!
It's so interesting and exciting!
And I'm so glad Sasuke is good now!
I love this!
It's so good!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
interesting, i love the plot.
and it seems believable as well heh
Juliette DeValence chapter 12 . 4/29/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/17/2013
very good story, maybe book 2 with have more romance in it between Naruto and Sakura.
theashendawn chapter 12 . 10/21/2013
SO EXCITED!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 12 . 10/21/2013
Awesome ending to this and can't wait for next book:)
Rosebunse chapter 12 . 10/21/2013
Interesting!
Rosebunse chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
Interesting...hurt Sasuke!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
Oh, very intense;)
theashendawn chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
Uh oh... O_O He better run! ;_;
dogluvva99 chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
You portray the characters so well! Thank you!
Afiana Arch chapter 10 . 10/11/2013
Pretty good i like the idea :D
kerp it up and make it longer pleaae! XD
HanamiyaDanniiMakoto chapter 10 . 10/10/2013
ugh, i bet Naruto will be upset with Sasu-kun, but then again, he would probably forgive him
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