Reviews for Secrets |
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![]() ![]() WOOO not a tiva story great thank god because all other oc stories they leave or die right away and ziva is suddenly there its so annoying and boring to read glad this is different |
![]() ![]() ![]() In one of the first few chapter you called the twins Darcy and Lucas |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ack! post the sequel soonest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't appreciate the major cliffhanger and holding the sequel hostage in exchange for reviews. Glad I waited for story to be complete and read the last few paragraphs before I wasted time reading your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad sofia finally woke up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was it Gibbs that got her moved to a private room? Soon I hope. (The convo between Gibbs and Sofia.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Jenny is dead - ok then... |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats easy - Jenny and Gibbs Sofia's dad is Gibbs which makes Tony Gibbs' son-in-law and Gibbs is now a grandfather, and Jackson gibbs (from stillwater) is a great grandfather. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so this is done during the time that Jenny Shephard was director of NCIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() McGee needs to be fired if he cannot something as simple as tracking a cell phone number. He does that on the Show practically every week. To say he cant track Tony's phone is very UNREALISTIC. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gibbs needs to be fired for being so useless if he has not yet discovered any secret that Tony has. Gibbs being the controlling dictatorial bully boss that he is, always knows everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() boy I hope she wakes up ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sure hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy Tony is getting another girl in his life. Looking forward to the big Sofia and Gibbs talk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, tried to read the first chapter but couldn't because each paragraph is one long run-on sentence. Took a chance on chapter two and ...same thing. Try putting in some periods in place of those commas you so love to use. And I think you could do with a BETA. |