Reviews for When The Dead Talk
5u5a chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Oh my. Came across this story quite by accident by clicking around. I LOVE it. I really hope you come back to it, as Molly is by far my favourite character in Sherlock, and she needs the chance to shine that you have provided. Please come back to this story!
SpaceHead3 chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
This is really interesting! Will you be updating it?
kaaterina petrova chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Woah...

You've got me hooked. Just - woah...

THIS IS REALLY GOOD. YOU SHOULD TOTALLY CONTINUE IT. I LOVE THE IDEA.

I've always loved Feisty Molly because Doormat Molly is a bore - I like this fanfiction; it seems really interesting and new!
Lasgalendil chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Sorry, left the last one as anonymous from my iphone while traveling...

I took a look at your profile/other story summaries and I noticed a disturbing trend as a fanfiction reader: incomplete. Many of your stories didn't get finished. I know I myself am guilty of this, but I hope its because life has gotten busy for you or you've moved on from your other fandoms rather than become disheartened with the story-telling itself. From what I saw in just this first chapter of one fic, you've developed a very efficient narration and very emotive characterization of not only canon characters but supporting OC cast as well. The Sherlock fandom is quite large, and many stories can go unnoticed or slip from the first page quite quickly, so I do sincerely hope it's your move (congratulations-how exciting!) that's been keeping you from updating rather than a lack of readers or reviews.

If you get the time, the internet access, and the jones to write more, please do!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Quite interesting so far! I didn't think a supernatural Sherlock fic would work given the cold rationale of the show, but by basing your story within the logic and reason of the series, such as her imagining Sherlock chiding her for the board, and her first dismissal of the board then her instinct "it's a hallucination" made this feel concrete enough to be believable.

Your characters are all emotive, and I especially like your very real, very rounded depoction of Molly as a very intelligent woman who is still capable of feeling weak, sad, and experiencing both anger an self-loathing. It is very easy to make all 'crying' women seem shallow, and all 'strong' women like complete bitches, and you've avoided both those pitfalls quite marvelously.

Your dialogue seems real, and your narration is sparse but effective. It's a very efficient way to tell a story that focuses more on the human element of a visual world the reader is already familiar with-and it follows Molly's thoughts in close third person narration, which makes the lack of intrusion of details that she is accustomed to and familiar with seem habitual, not like an absence of world building.

Can't wait to see where this goes!
Eun Mi chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Are ou going to continue this?
CloudCuckooLandHasAQueen chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I hope you'll be able to update! This was a really awesome start!
Psychobillybutterfly chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Not what I was expecting at all, ghost, perfect for this time of year!
Crimson and Chrome 42 chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Fingers and toes crossed. I'm dying (slight pun intended) to know what happens! So far, I like New Molly, I hope the rest of the characters will too (though I suspect Sherlock will be a bit resistant at first). Great job and update as soon as you can!
MizJoely chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Wow, great beginning! Looking forward to more!
Gumi Langley chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
wow, please update
TaintedMuse1804 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
It's amazing, please update soon!
lucy chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
oh my god this is brilliant love this story xxx
catsgotmytongue chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Oooohh...keep going!
I have a feeling this is going to be one of the rare, very good stories one hopes to find in fanfic.
Tenshi chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Omg this is a grate story so far... Please don't neglect it and don't delay your update ... Love the idea and I want to know whatwillhappen next!
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