This. Is. Brilliant. I absolutely love it. It's fast-paced without feeling rushed; and the way you build everything up only to have it all come crashing down. This is a fantastic piece of writing.

That Was Fucking Horrible why did you kill off luna

Why did you have to make it sad?
BUT IN THIS CASE IT WAS AWSOME

That's a pretty awful ending.

I kinda gotta agree with that one reviewer. This isn't Luna at all.

I'm a BIG Harry/Luna pairing.
I'll add this to my Haruna (Harry/Luna) community.

:))

Well, only good thing is the nice RUSHED instant fast food pace. Which normally would not be good.
But good in this instance, to not read tens or hundreds of thousands of words of a fluffy romance that suddenly hits a wall and ends with Luna stabbed to death.
Hooray it was only 1200 words to reach such a shitty ending.

Shite. That is not okay. Gah. Feels!

Why,oh why, oh why?! This was totally tragic. I still have tears in my eyes, but any story of Luna's death makes me cry. Nicely written, but totally tragic.

This is very good i like it its nicely done .