| Reviews for Travel Secrets: Second |
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Nad19 chapter 1 . 7/21 ah, so there's a sequel |
Wicked Kisses chapter 27 . 6/13 Yet another excellent st. |
Amu4ever chapter 25 . 5/24 Why is Harry acting like that? He lets himself be bullied and like he said in this chapter that will only lead to war later on. |
Amu4ever chapter 9 . 5/23 So, according to Google the average British 12 year old is 4ft 10.7in. Harry was shorter than average. So...Lily Potter as adult was the size of maybe an eleven year old child? Oo |
Amu4ever chapter 19 . 5/23 A twelve year old Harry (who was short for his age at that point) had to SHRINK for an adult Lily Evans? Seriously? She didn't seem that short in the movies at all! |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/12 The whole idea and everything seemed pretty interesting. And the first story was pretty good. But the second one sucks and I have to end it here. The way Harry is bullied all the time by all, especially all the Professors, is ridiculous. The way Harry is incapable to find a single diary in the hands of a possessed student in multiple months is more than annoying and ridiculous. He knows when what will happen, he could lay in wait, make someone spy, use muggle technology that works on magic, mind rape all the students, anything, ... but no, he is more incapable than his 12 year old self. And then he has to go and kiss Severus Snape, urgh *puke* thats just disgusting on too many levels. If he wanted to make Severus happy, then he should have simply booked a hooker (with another dose of Polyjuice) for him. |
Nkhamer chapter 27 . 4/27 Thank you so much for continuing this! This has honest to GOD been the best fanfics I have ever read. |
stevem1 chapter 27 . 4/26 This is a pretty good second year HP AU. A couple of things were off (the difficulty tracking down the diary [there are only 400 students], Snape’s kiss, Neville accusing HP of being Dark right after the rescue, etc...) but the writing is excellent. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6 You know I’ve noticed that you’ve actually done a complete reversal in harry and made him incredibly impulsive. |
moodysavage chapter 16 . 1/12 How you wrote the Quidditch game was awesome! It was definately the best game I've read in a story and I've read a lot! |
fhl1234 chapter 27 . 1/9 Excellent fic. Onto the next and final fic. Really hope that you pick up the fic again and finish Harry's third year some day. |
ironhair chapter 26 . 1/9 This was a good read as always. Looking forward to Dumbledore getting his just rewards, soon. |
Calmzone1 chapter 17 . 1/7 Lol, I can’t believe I missed it the first or second times reading. Blaise replies, ‘Twelve, obviously.’ But Harry is 12 and would be turning 13 at his next birthday. :) |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 19 . 1/7 Still disgusting despite your reasoning. |
fhl1234 chapter 1 . 1/5 Fantastic first chapter. |