Cute!

This was really hot and beautiful at the same Time with the way Zoro was seeing Sanji so thank you very much!

Incredibly well done! The scene in the back room of the club was one of my favorites!
You kept some amazing tension throughout this whole fic and I just-wow! :D

Holy crap, I'd just had this fic rec'd to me by a friend and somehow I'd not managed to see it before. Hot damn had I been missing out! Everything about this is awesome from how damn well you described Sanji's actions in the first chapter to their mutual frustration with each other in this chapter as well as the *amazing* sex at the end. Bravo!

Holy crap this is hot. I loved it! Thank you for writing this! (Now I just need a cold shower.)

Really a cute and cool little story! Love it! Thanks!

Very sexy.., very well written.., I liked how our progressed and came together.., I really enjoyed that it was super long as well.., but I have a couple of things to point out.., when they left Luffy's, they got into Sanji's car, but Sanji ride with them in Nami's car to get to the party.., also Sanji only knew Ace an hour, minus time to cook and find him a shirt.., that's not much time to "talk about Zoro alot".., and why would Sanji talk about Zoro to a shirtless hungry stranger? Maybe Ace lied..,

One last thing: "It had been two weeks since Zoro had last seen Sanji. This also made it two weeks since the first time Zoro had seen Sanji, because the first time Zoro had ever seen the blond man was also the last time he'd seen him." I laughed and laughed and laughed.., thank you! Great fic

Sanji could get fired for that you know.., but they Murray be in Canada because Canadians are super nice and will do anything.., can I borrow your car? Sure! Loan me $50? Here you go! Give me your arm? No problem!

Sorry I watch too much Family Guy.., anyway it wad sexy and I loved it.., oh and yay for two shot!

If I say pretty please would you do a third chapter? Pretty please! X)))

That was super sexy! Wonderful job with this! I really enjoyed your characters! Great job! :)

-Yvonne

ahhhh I usually don't comment on my guilty pleasure stories (smut) but yours was to good to resist. I loved how there was the right amount of hotness and cute development in the story so awesome job! Now excuse me while I ready everything you've written *runs off*

Oooo I didn't see that you had made part two of this! I'm so happy you gave us more of the Sanji and Zoro from this particular universe. They had great chemistry. Good stuff and flawless writing as always. :)

Wow...that was really hot. O_O I think I need to splash some cold water on my face. XD

THAT WAS BRILLIANT!

OH YEAH and how about ...part 3! SANZO! :D :D :D

Oh and thanks you for the long 2nd chp!
just may be as long as sanji...