Wow...that was so sweet, so beautiful... You got an idea for a short story and came up with a real winner. Asuka's family was a sadness in the story, you did great with it.

That was so sweet T_T

cute. nice little WAFFy slice-of-life. well done

Just wonderful! :3

Aww... All Asuka really needed was a hug. And that's canon too.

I wonder if her pursuit of Kaji was just her desperate attempt to get some kind of physical affection, not even the sexual kind.

damn cute

It was nice, except for the ending. It doesn't really felt like it actually ended, it's too abrupt. I think you could have drawn out that ending sentence a bit to make this one-shot feel more concluded, without actually adding anything more to the plot itself.

Other than that, good job.

Well, I don't really have much to say, and frankly, there's so little that it leaves me nothing to comment on. It could be a bit longer... you know... a bit more dialogues just to make it more memorable, and a bit longer buildup to make the end all more worthy. It did feel like it came all of a sudden, but hey... that Vietnamese facts and all that... I'll just join in with the rest...

D'awwwwww

Awww! so sweet.

Another great pairing story! Hope to see more like this coming from you in the future!

Excellent one-shot. I crave more! The build-up to the resolution is nicely handled and natural, and the conclusion satisfying. The way you present Asuka and Shinji's relationship always makes for great reading. Thanks for this gem!

Awwww... very sweet and well written. It's enough to make a crusty old Eva fan go all fuzzy-like.

That was simply a heartwarming piece right there. I wonder if you are going to make stuff like this.

Nice story. Short, quick to the point, just the way it should be. :)

Short, sweet, and poignant. I really enjoyed this.

Thanks for writing!