| Reviews for Intervention |
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kimjo2 chapter 1 . 6/13/2019 Amazing how many plot holes and illogical story lines can fiction has revealed to me. Thanks for your contributions to my revelations. |
ordinaryguy2 chapter 1 . 5/17/2019 I really enjoyed this. Extremely well done. Still kind of wished Hermione had realized Harry liked her, but you can't have everything. Seriously, your Deadman was really good. And placing Hagrid as the vanquisher of Voldemort would really take away a lot of the attention from the public that Harry didn't like. Thanks for the story! |
gginsc chapter 1 . 3/29/2019 I think the ghost parents encouraging Harry to commit suicide was a bit much. What parent who loves their child would do that? Presenting them as constructs of Dumbles explains why they wanted Harry to die. Sick bastard. |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 10/21/2018 A great story here! |
ProfessorPedant chapter 1 . 6/14/2018 So many of your stories leave me with a smile. This is certainly one. And I always picture Brand as drawn by Neal Adams in the old the Brave & the Bold comics. Well done. |
BMS chapter 1 . 1/1/2018 Excellent story. |
noylj chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 You know "mano" means hand, right? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 I loved it in a lot of ways hagrid was Tom first victim |
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 2/25/2016 Tom is an ordinary evil. Albus is EVIL cloaked in the robes of "good". The " Greater Good". Albus is the true Dark, not Tom. If Albus had forced the issue and used truth potion on the death eaters the first time Tom died so much could be avoided. Albus is more evil than Tom. |
pikachucat chapter 1 . 2/3/2016 awesome story |
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 1/22/2016 Well, I don't know anything about Boston - the city or the character - but this was a cute story. I also like the idea of Harry and Susan Bones together. She's cute and funny and doesn't seem like the type to use Amortentia on Harry, the way I suspect Ginny did. (I'm sorry, but I will always believe that's how she nabbed him.) Like Harry, Susan seems perfectly content to eschew the spotlight and enjoy a peaceful, happy life. I always get the sense that Ginny was more in love with Harry the Legend, the BWL, and the Hero of the Wizarding World than with plain old Harry Potter. The niece of an important member of the Wizarding government, Susan can help Harry navigate the political business of heading the Potter and Black families. Her best friend, Hannah, is going to marry Neville, who I think will make a great, non-jealous friend for Harry. I also get the impression that Susan would just love to make a cozy home with Harry and fill it with lots of kids instead living the glamorous life of an international Quidditch star. Yes, I think Susan would be a great match for Harry. Nice story! |
entelejent chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 I was serenely enjoying the story, and then the big guy was involved. Then I had to work to keep my laughter under control. That was a fun idea, though I would have loved to see more detail in Voldemort's accusations, including stuff like him fearing his foe's unparalleled magical ability, which is part of why he hatched that plot and even now wouldn't dare to duel him with magic. In the larger story, it would have been nice to have more seriousness at parts to emphasize the humor, but whatever. Nice job. |
geetac chapter 1 . 9/23/2015 I like this story . |
Silverdragonstar chapter 1 . 9/19/2015 Great story, yes I was pretty concerned that the loving parents and adults from Harry's life would take his pending suicide so well. Love Lord Light Hagrid. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2015 Hagrid the Light Lord? ... ... ... BRILLIANT! |