I have read all these chapters in a mater of 2 days . you have fantastic grammer, perfect timing and wonderful attention to detail. this is just the right amount of smut without seeming B movie porn like . thanks for a good read and please keep it up !

Hi. It's over 3 years since you wrote this, but I have to say; Wow! I totally enjoyed every charter. Thank you. I hope to find more of your work to read.
Lisa

Sam with a laptop resting on the bed while watching porn... Dean smirking as he stands in front of me as he looks at his phone... Both naked ;p ;) ;p oh you have got to say what that fantasy is please please please

Wow, I went through all of this in a night and Im seriously in love with your characters. and not only that but your writing is incredible. I can tell that you put so much thought into every little thing and it truly amazes me. Really. I love your style and i cant wait to read more. Job well done my friend.

PLEASE UPDATE

O my gummy bears I looooved ur fic it was amazing! It was so awesome! Pleeeease update!

Wow. Okay. First off, I have to start with saying how intricately beautiful this chapter was written, from beginning to end. The wedding really was a great and well-written scene, from Dean thinking about Mr. and Mrs. White Picketfence, to him and Noni dancing, completely secluded to each other, both conflicted by their own thoughts and feelings toward each other.

The love scene was one of the best love scenes I've ever read. Ever. The fact that it was all kissing tenderly, no bites, no oral, not even a condom, just BEING with each other in the closest manner possible was truly a mark on just how much they love each other. It had very little to do with sex itself, but moreover all about the intimacy, closeness, and love you get from having sex, if with the right person. It was beautifully bittersweet, in that way that makes your heart cringe, because you could just FEEL the frustration, the passion, the love, all bubbling together in one boiling pot.

Throughout all the chapters, you had Dean and Noni's feelings growing for each other at a perfect pace, to the point I was desperate to have them admit them to each other. But not until this scene did I really experience or believe (not that I didn't disbelieve) their true love for one another. I was practically yelling when Noni gave the 'I'm yours but we can't love' speech, because you built up their development so well and had them FINALLY admit their feelings and then . . . the requirements for Hunting sets in. I was almost hoping for the chick-flick finale when the beautiful heroine takes off in the taxi, and the square-jawed, athletic hero catches her at the last second. However, that's too sappy for my taste and would have destroyed the bittersweetness of this chapter (and is so NOT Dean). Because honestly, I will repeat myself just to emphasize the truth of this statement; all of it was beautifully written, and you had me feeling everything I'm sure you wanted your readers to feel.

And now I've reached the end, and you have me on my hands and knees, tears twinkling in my eyes as I plead for the next chapter. Because this cliffhanger . . . I should cry for you to be hanged. But if you were hanged then I would never get chapter 22 and then I would experience that 'eye-twitching' withdrawal we have discussed. I even went back and reread that love scene several times, just because your wording and language was so exquisite that it was the 'watching over reading' thing again.

I'll be in the corner of my room, tweaking.

Ohh, first off, I forgot to mention in my last review, and I feel the need to mention it now, that I absolutely loved the opening scene with all of them smushed up on the bed and Dove, being the littlest person there, took up the most space. It really was an adorable scene and there was one amazing line of Dove's that was something like 'Just because I'm not freakishly big as all you.' Something like that. It gave me a giggle.

Onto this chapter! I really appreciate your amazing skills at developing the relationship between Dean and Noni. Over the past twenty chapters or so, I have witnessed them go from hookup buddies to something much more, even if they are yet to truly admit to themselves. Their 'love' and relationship has been building with every chapter, but you have written it out so subtly that it is all the more believable, and all the more sweeter. I very much admire writers who can perfect development in their characters, as it is very satisfying for the reader and author alike.

I feel that there are few women out there who 'gets' or 'understands' Dean, but Noni really takes the cake on that one. Their personalities are very compatible, and it's incredibly refreshing to see her get him to open up (because it's a bit like trying to break open a rock with a jackhammer made out of butter). I really respect and admire her for that. I also really loved her response to Dean's comment about saying he and Sam should have sex with her and Dove, because it was the only thing they asked. She was completely right in saying the brothers would have regretted it because neither of them were comfortable.

I always feel like a broken record when I say this, but damn your smut is so hot. And it's not just the 'actions' between the characters, but I can feel the passion and emotion between the two which basically almost makes me claw at my screen, all red-faced. The animalistic chanting of 'mine' was unexpected as well as unexpectedly erotic. I really do feel that they need to, and will, finally admit their feelings to one another because as much as they both want to believe their sex is just 'physical', it would eventually become too painful to be so intimate while carrying the weight of their true feelings, thinking they can never word them.

You know I had a full on five minute giggle attack because as I read your AN about the coffee shop, I am literally sitting in a coffee shop now. Which okay, you would have thought the lesson would have been learned, but the internet has been down in my dorm this past month (I think you put it as craptastic) but fanfics are my drug and fanfic authors are my drug dealers. They also have the world's best dirty Chai, so . . . it's worth the wet seat. I'm completely fucking shameless.

Okay, so many things I loved about this chapter. First, I love the way that Dove understands Sam and how she made him open up about his anger regarding Dean and his convo with him. I really loved Dove's line 'I'm only alabaster in skin tone, I'm not actually made out of porcelain.' I thought that was really perfect and clever.
The angry sex was indescribably HOT. From 'I'm tired of people telling me what I can and can't do today' . . . Shiver me timbers. How you describe all of your sex scenes, I swear to god your words are fucking me, which sounds completely ridiculous but I have no idea how else to put it. I can 'feel', 'hear', and 'see' every situation just by reading your wonderful and beautifully sexy threading of words.
Forceful Sam is always amazingly steamy to read, and you really nailed it, to the point I had to go back and reread it several times just because . . . so damn sexy. As far as the no glove love, it really was too much in the heat of the moment. Even if someone were to get out of the shower to grab that condom for just a second, it could have ruined that moment of animalistic hunger emanating from Sam. It worked very well with the scene.
Did I mention it was steaming hot? Tendrils of smoke are still rising from my laptop . . .

I'm glad that Sam and Dean finally sucked it up and apologized to each other. I could tell they both probably wanted to say a lot more, but it's a very Winchester thing to leave things unsaid.

I loved this chapter, but I'm so sad I'm coming to the end of this story. Hopefully we'll see that update soon! Great job.

I really loved this chapter. I've mentioned it before, but you paint a pretty clear picture with all of your writing, not just the smut. Smut, as least from my experience, can be very challenging to portray clearly, mainly because there's a lot of action happening. But what a lot of people take for granted is how hard it can to make the 'action' of the subtlest scenes interesting, such as the tense breakfast scene with the brothers or Dean's wonderful convo with Red. It takes some effort to keep the reader invested in the simplest actions, but you really do great with all angles, whether it's the smut or these subtle moments. It wasn't lost on me.

I really like Red. Several parts in his and Dean's conversation actually made me laugh at loud, especially at Red's line 'You're such a cool swingin' hipster with a bitchin' chariot'. That was great. I also really loved how Red pulled the whole 'Face it, you're meeting your girlfriend's dad' even if so far Dean and Noni have refused to use such titles. All in the same day he's now had Sam and Red tell him he's made his affection with Noni obvious enough that they can make the claim that they love each other, which would force Dean to look at the matter and make it much harder to deny any further. They may be very subtle hints, but nearly in every chapter I'm slowly starting to see Dean's words of 'Hunters can't love' as just words, rather than him really believing them himself, which probably makes him angry with himself.

I really enjoyed this chapter so much, and I do think it's interesting that you covered the whole 'it's been two years since I asked for anything'. Really great job :] I'm going to try and fit int he time for the next chapter faster than I usually do.

Wow. Okay, where to start . . . where to start . . . I'm going to review both chapters now simply because I couldn't lick the 'Next chapter' button faster. I honestly feel a little ashamed of not reading this earlier because honestly this chapter was amazing all the way around. And please take that compliment to heart because it takes a LOT to get me invested in even a SLIGHTLY Wincest fic. But you did such an amazing job with this that I was practically panting and begging for more by the end of it.

Noni and Dove; those clever minxes. While I do not think Eric Kripke would have used the 'Wincest Foursome' to mend the brothers' relationship, I think THAT would have started off Supernatural with more of a bang opposed to 'Dad's on a hunting trip...'. In all seriousness, it actually was smart thinking if not a bit of a risk, because it could have honestly made things worse if they hadn't handled it like they did.

The reason why I'm so skeptic about Wincest fics (as light as this one was) is because many authors struggle with making it realistic. But you paced it so wonderfully so as to make it roll along quite smoothly, and make me actually believe that this might happen. I was giggling and blushing by the time Noni was reeling the blindfolded Dean into the room where Sam was tied up. The girls fooling around in front of the boys when they only have their hands was a perfect ice-breaker. Slowly but surely, it made Dean and Sam sexually comfortably around each other, which was further proved when Dean was so adamant about watching Noni give Sam the blowjob. (My ovaries exploded, just FYI.) Also the knee massage was a nice hot touch. I also loved how the end of the chapter, Dean and Sam were back to 'Brother's in arms' when it came to sexually torturing the girls as they had done to them.

The way you write your oral scenes has a way of getting me hot bothered almost like no other. I practically have to make SURE that no one is going to be around when I read this story because I have to lock the door immediately after. I really, really loved this chapter and sincerely thought you did an absolutely amazing job with everything. I think you may have just turned me a bit more onto the idea of Wincest.

Really great job. Seriously loving this story, the relationships, the characters, the smut, development. Gah. I love it.

This was an amazing chapter revolving around Dean and Noni. There was a perfect balance of hardcore sexiness that left my face beet red (LITERALLY beet red), and some really sincere sweet moments that left me smiling against my will. I think we really saw a new aspect of Dean and Noni's relationship in this chapter, especially when they both finally admitted (at least to themselves) that they 'made love' opposed to just 'fucking'. I feel that the more they get physically intimate, even if it's something as naughty as schoolgirl role playing, it's also just bringing them more emotionally closer, thus making it harder to completely deny their true feelings. You are writing that part of their relationship SO perfectly. Here I am like a really exuberant member in the audience, jumping and down and shouting "TELL HER YOU LOVE HER/HIM/!" I feel that even the little forehead kisses are Dean's way of getting away with showing his honest affection for Noni with outwardly admitting them.

I loved the gift scene, and that Noni was expecting it so be some sex toy, but in reality it was something as sweet and innocent as chocolates, lip gloss, and the bottle opener keychain. Again, it shows that Dean notices and cares for her on an entirely different level that doesn't involve sex. Especially since he obviously listened to her "whining about her other one being broken" and acted on it accordingly. It really was an adorable scene and I loved it so much.

I thought the 'first time' anal scene was done well (and hot, obviously), and I loved that Dean really was focused on making it all about the birthday girl. It was perfect that he understood and respected that no matter how experienced Noni was in sex, anal was new to her and that it needed to be taken at a gentle pace. I was also just crazy over the schoolgirl/principal scene as the first one. I was practically panting over Dominant Dean; incredibly sexy. (Also he checked to make sure her bum was okay! So cute!)

Also on a side note, I forgot to mention it in my last review but your previous A/N actually made me burst out laughing. Maybe I should try that sometime.

Really loved this chapter, and sorry my reviews are spaced so far apart. (I'm also a little afraid of finishing this story too quickly because I know there's only 21 chapters and want to make them last) Again, excellent job on this chapter :]

You seem to diving into my own personal fantasies with this story. I think I need to have an installation of about twenty fans in my dorm room so my face doesn't get THIS red whilst reading. Oh boy, this one really got to me. Lord have mercy on my ovaries.

First, I love how much freaking thought Noni put into all that. The effort involved and how perfect she made it all was not lost on me, everything from the her high school photo (love the fact that she went through a punk phase) to white cotton panties! White. Cotton. Panties! I basically had the same reaction as Dean, because damn girl! I love how thorough the role play was! Dean directing Noni how to do a blow job was so damn hot, as well as everything he was saying when he was going down on her.
I believe a big part of what made it so very sexy was how into it they both were, because they both took their roles effortlessly. The dirty talk had me swooning and as always, your description of oral was on point. Your use of words had me panting, threading them out into a full on, sex-tastic, clawing-at-my-screen-in-desperation, sexy fun time. This is one of those chapters that you go back to read when you realize you've got time for 'me time'.

In terms of sexual fantasies, Noni and I have a lot in common. This piece was really excellent, both with your descriptions and the buildup which was just as sexy as the oral fun itself. Love, love, loved it.

Amazing chapter. Until next time :]

Well first off let me say that after so much of general stress and traveling this was such a wonderful thing to return to. I always look forward to fitting 'Ships Reading Time' in with my schedule. Preferably when I know I'm going to be alone.

Second, it feels a bit like Lord Poseidon visited me in my pants. Which, yes okay, weird visual. But I mean it in the way that there's a bit of a flood down there. I hope you're laughing at this because I certainly am on how ridiculous that sounds.

BUT THE CHAPTER. I really loved the 'Christmas Special' with Sam and Dove and how she found the more assertive side of Sam sexy. It makes sense with the contrast of his typical gentle behavior that his more dominant shades would be considered arousing.

Again, glad to see Jess is getting more into the mix and am curious as to how quickly you're going to initiate her and Sam's relationship, or if you'll even include it. Mainly because it still looks as though Dove and Sam have their future chapters. But I suppose that's the glory of reading on and finding out.

I really loved how different you made this threesome compared to the last one, but still with equal levels of sexiness. I know earlier you displayed concern on 'keeping track of all the hands and parts' but I never get lost in any of what's happening. Your words flow so effortlessly with the actions of the characters that at times that sometimes I forget that I'm actually reading something opposed to watching.
I feel like a broken record, but it was so HOT and well done. When it comes to the vibrator, I feel that Sam is so sexually rebellious to jump out of 'typical man' and, despite his initial hesitance, would thoroughly enjoy the experience.

I genuinely feel at this point that Dean, whatever blessing he has given his brother, would feel a great discomfort at the concept of other men sleeping with Noni. Especially since he admitted, at least to himself, that he loved her and could never tell her. Obviously he would smile and nod, pretend he doesn't care when really jealousy and confusion broils his insides.

Really loved this chapter and thought you did a splendid job. Until next time.

WOW. Okay, where do I even begin . . . I'm so red in the face I can't even think straight. Again; I need to learn to keep a dictionary at hand whenever I read this story because English is all but forgotten.

First, it's relieving that before engaging in sex again, the girls told Dean everything, and I do believe that Noni was right when she said that it would help them go back to being 'them'. Dean's anger was justified, but I'm glad he calmed down enough to let Noni and Dove explain everything, and also clearing up the 'who slept with who' and that they clarified that Dove and Sam's relationship was much like him and Noni. Plus, he officially got Sam's 'blessing' as it were, and that clears away a lot of doubt. Also that phone call between Dean and Sam was very spot on for both their characters. The 'she's bi so banging a bitch like you is two for one' was point on 'Dean'.

Now the fun part. That was SERIOUSLY your first ever attempt to write a threesome? Basically from the point that Dove was sitting on Dean's lap, I had to fan myself to keep my temperature down. An amazing combination of sensuality and just bang on HOTNESS. You really know what words to put to make the reader just have that little shock of excitement and think to themselves 'Jesus Christ that's so freaking hot.' I really liked the attention to oral and how you effortlessly included them all in the sexy fun. At the part where the girls were lying in front of him and going back and forth between him, I had to put my hands over my face and curl up in a ball to take a small breather (we discussed my cardiac problems before).

So I can definitely say that in the future, this is one of those chapters which I will remember to take another gander at when no one is at home. Loved all of it, so, so sexy, and as always, amazing job :]