Reviews for Insomnia
hurdygurd chapter 14 . 4/14/2015
BODILLY! I TOLD YOU IT WAS BODILLY!
hurdygurd chapter 13 . 4/14/2015
It a Bodilly Pickle! Yay! Hurdy like Pickle!
Lyssie chapter 7 . 3/31/2015
You were going to call Ecnorite Endstone, weren't you?
hasidus9aid9OKJS90uijskaiosjas chapter 8 . 2/17/2015
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
JASON IS A FREAKING AIRBENDER YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
WAIT HUSKY CAN BE KATARA JEROME CAN BE TOPH HERORINE CAN BE AZULA AND then thres the other one
corgi101 chapter 13 . 10/3/2014
SKYFALL

I CALL IT
Guest chapter 13 . 8/19/2014
Done ;D
CaramelApplezKat chapter 14 . 8/7/2014
Such a nice ending :D!
Good story, bro! :P
verismal chapter 15 . 7/26/2014
Booooodil

But those are some impressive stats _ I so proud of you ;-;
verismal chapter 14 . 7/26/2014
Jordan's going to leave? Understandable. But Sky probably blamed himself for not being able to control himself. It ishn't yo fault, Jordan ;-;

Okay, first. For the second section. That's why it's called Insomnia, huh? I didn't really get that title. But now it makes sense :3

Dat last part, though. Bodil, hm? Fallen. Whoo! I shalleth get restarted on that, tomorrow! With new found knowledge of these characters.

No wonder I was a bit bored when I read Fallen the first time around. Because I didn't know it had to books preceding it, and was missing out on quite. A lot. Of information x3
verismal chapter 13 . 7/26/2014
Oh. My. God. Oh my. Oh my. Nostalgia. First. Chapter. Fallen. OH! I knew it was Sky! I was confused in that chapter, because that person never was referenced to again...Oh! Oh! Oh! Okay, now when I re-read Fallen, things will make a lot more sense.

So that's Bodil...Hmm...Hey, I guessed it! (I'm from the future o_o)

Awww...Is Jerome's tree going to get destroyed D: Wait. Aren't there people in that. Erm. Next section. I shall read. Wait. Just noticed the name of this chapter.

Wow. So the battle has started, some think Sky is dead...

Okay. One, I'd love to see Dawn's confused face, two, It's the final. Battle. Stay alive people.

But they really should take the risk. Better than the world being lost to flames. And death. And despair?

Oh god. Jordan got stabbed. But he's alive? Wait, he's immortal, rights. But I thought those effects haven't kicked in yet? Wait, unless it's only the aging effect that starts at whatever age?

Hmmm...Well. Epilogue. Let's go. o_o
verismal chapter 12 . 7/26/2014
Well. He got. Dragged down. What's going to happen. To. Sky.

"Wakey wakey up." Oh my god. ;_;
verismal chapter 11 . 7/26/2014
A warning, to the people, the good and, the evil...

Thank the lawd fo' random blades lying around! He's free! Quick, Sky, quick, quick, quick! Save yo friends!

You can't tame Seto! Haha! Thank goodness he's so stubborn, and aware of consequences. I swear, he is awesome.

Oh shoot. But it happened in the end. He mastered the element of Ecronite. Ergh.
verismal chapter 10 . 7/26/2014
A story. That's Animal. A sequel to a story. That's Insomnia. A sequel to a sequel to a story. That's Fallen. A sequel to a sequel to a sequel to a story. That's Wizard.

(/'o')/ _ (That was a table flip, if the legs didn't show up properly) Noooo! What's. The. Squid. Gonna do! Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear. Be. Alive. Stay. Alive. Shaaat.

Oh. That's really some good acting. Really good acting. And they fell for it. Even when 'Sky' didn't have his sunglasses .-. I'm not sure if you have any supernatural reason for your Sky to have sunglasses on, or if it's just a personal preference...I don't think he does xP

Awh. Young Jordan. Young Jordan with no friends, not much of a grasp on his powers, and not much intelligence about the overworld.

Dawww. (Can't believe I'm saying that, while in the story, people are currently going to probably be brutally murdered. Hey, I'm just that kinda person.)
verismal chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
I love how the squid isn't afraid to correct Herobrine. Even though he was acting quite frightened earlier...O_O Figure out yo characters, child. (Just kidding. You're probably older than me xD) But still. Figure out yo characters.

Wait, so a body alone is enough to provide a bit of power to the element...Shoooot, and the chapter names are now in the "_ Days Until Destruction" format...Hm, why's this story called Insomnia? The fact that Jordan couldn't sleep in the beginning?

Oh shoot, and now Seto is captured. And Jerome and Jason sorta saw him, so they must be quite a bit confused, hm?

Oh! I remember in one of your one-shots you talked about some scar...That must be what you were talking about! Oh, oh, oh! So many things are being revealed to me, just because I chose to read Animal and Insomnia xD I am such a derp .-.

"Aye, aye, Captain Brine"...*Giggles*

But now, Seto is alive...But...But being asked for the secret of Ecronite...And. And.

Well, at least Seto is being. You know. Stubborn.

But shoot. NO SETO, DON'T SAY! Oh Notch. Oh golly, you managed to bring me into character speak .-. Dang.
verismal chapter 8 . 7/25/2014
Oh, shoot. Jason. Jason. Air. Of course. Damn. Well. Well. One element left, and who possesses the secret of it...Or rather, what is it.

One week is over? So then...Wait, Jordan is going to the Nether, but Herobrine is in the overworld o.O

Oh my god, little Husky. Talks. So. Cutely. But, what's his sorta secret? Herm.

Well, now Husky knows that Jordan is related to Herobrine in some sort of form.

Oooh, Kermit and Jerome. What a cute little scene x3 I love how you're making us 'Daw', and follow that up with some sort of sad scene...What'll the scene be this time, I wonder.

Oooh, now to start Jason's flashback. I wonder what it is. And what are you intending on doing with all these memories...Herm. You are very hard to predict.

Omg. Now I know. So THAT was the town Herobrine burned down when Jordan went to the Overworld for the first time...Will Jason and Seto recognize those blue eyes? I think Seto probably realized already, but, you know...He's understanding. But Jason. I'm not sure if he knows about Jordan's secret yet. I'm pretty sure he doesn't.

I find it kinda funny when he still doesn't recognize Jordan through his shades and baby blue eyes. Herm.

Wait. Wait. So Seto is the one who knows the secret of Ecnorite. I laughed so much when I read "But then it had just gone and thrown himself onto a sword." Omg, I swear. But I hate how he refers to Seto as an it -_- I hate you for dat, Herobrine. Hate you. Like. Passionately. Do you want me to throw you onto a sword, hm? *Grins evilly* (Not talking to you, coldstone. Talking to a character. Yet again o_o)

I kinda knew that Seto possessed the knowledge of that element, though, when I read that small section about Seto not entering the house, in Jason's flashback. At least, I guessed it, if ya know what I mean.

Oh shoot, the monster is still alive. Shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot. And he knows that Seto is a ghost, but still partially alive...With the element of Ecronite. Argh, this is bad. Bad, bad, bad.
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