Noooooo! Plz continue this. It is a great story!

Hell of a story can't wait for the next chapter.

You should continue. It is very well written. I think many would enjoy it. It describes their relationship perfectly.

You should definitely update this story. The plot twists keep me constantly on my toes. I also like that you don't have everything fine all the time between Hiccup and Toothless. It makes them seem more genuine. The fighting about Stormfly and Astrid was a nice touch.

This story is beyond amazing! Easily one of the absolute best stories I have ever read, FF or not. The dynamic you have made between Toothless and Hiccup is perfect and jerks at my heart with every chapter. Your story telling leaves me enthralled. I can not wait for the next chapter. Please, I beg of you, update this story as soon as you can!

This is getting really interesting :D

Getting annoyed with Toothless. Just because Hiccup is immortal doesn't make him invincible to hurt. How would Toothless like it if Hiccup waved his dagger, sword or bow around every time he teased him in the slightest? And if dragons are supposedly more testy than humans about mates and appearance, then what gives him the right to tease Hiccup.

If you are having trouble with words describing their relationship, might I suggest 'partners', 'companions' or 'bond brothers'?

Please keep going! Its getting good :D

I really like the story and Toothless' and Hiccup's relationship :)

Do you have to keep hammering it in? Every other chapter is a chapter 'its not romance, its friendship' 'they love eachother , but are not in love' and I think its really not neccisary. Brothers don't talk or think all the time about how NOT 'in' love they are, it would be just uncomfortable.

Also, if you saw an angry dragon crouched over a person, your first thought wouldn't be about intamacy, (unless you are an extreme animal perv) as its instinctual to fear an angry dragon, weather you know its friendly or not.

Sorry to go off like this, but its a little insulting, not ALL of you fans are stupid pervs.

Anyway, love the story, can't wait to see what happens next :)

Onward!
Aurora

Chapter19
OW THIS IS THE BEST PART! WHAT A BIG MESS ! What happends next ?!
He lied that he is future seer , He is from west , you know from where , The Qeen doesn't know the events that happened there ...
Now what will happen when she if she learn the truth . Is Tooth's mom alive ?! How Hic will solve that mess .
How continues that story if there is one more .
Well I would like to be updated that story because it is intresting , but it is Your's so do as You wish .
For potential response here is my post box :

First well somwtimes in the epsds I hear a word or two knowing latin (english base part)
Well wat language is Th ?

Ch .11
Ok well partly I thouth too for the dragons but with tons of stories when dragons well other NF talks as a person to pack of wolves who adopted her and her history (The beautiful shades of Night Fury) other stories with dragon as persons definatly changed my view for them and the other animals . Now I wonder if it is possible and I am sure that is to teach the ones who like me so much well the written words of my language to it . To talk , comunicate better . I think .
I understand and know a lot of them but still my little fear is showing again and I have to hardly see and remind myself the truth I l know .
What the dragons really are .
And Sena is an example what Toothless basicly feel but in other well our human form .

For response for my revew here is my post which is :

I hope this story is still going. I am not familiar with how frequently LesserWraith updates his stories as I found his account after all his creations were made, but seeing that this story was last updated in February doesn't get my hopes up.

Oh no, the so-far written story is coming to an end. I hope this gets more updates in the future, because so far, there is only one chapter left, and I don't want this story to die anytime soon.

I like the random humor-filled moments you put in this story. "Cue the credits please" made me loose it. But then a short few paragraphs later and Hiccup is crying. I have noticed that your story itself is suffering from mood swings. One second everyone will be laughing, and the next second someone is extremely depressed and is crying. The moments do add conflict where it is necessary (as a story with no lemon gets pretty boring fast), but Hiccup really needs to get his emotions together.

I am beginning to question how the whole "Dragonese pronunciation" thing works, like are they actually saying the works as they are written (you know, the moments where Sena talks with Toothless), or are the words written just translated from a series of growls? Because when I see some of the words Toothless says in Dragonese, and him only being able to make sounds in tones, I don't imagine him actually saying the words in anything actually sounding like words.

This is in its own way cannon, because of how you reference the past events of the show as well, like the Whispering Death battle. I can also agree that the show isn't very good, as they make the dragons look a bit more irrational than the original movie portrayed them as.