Hi, I really love your story n couldn't wait for your updates. I wanted you to know that actually Daphne is the one in Hermione's year not Astoria. In Cannon Astoria is the younger one by two years. Just wanted you to know. Thank you. Keep writing please eventhough I knew that fanfic writer often met difficulties when they wanted to develop their stories further. Cheers :)

This is such a good story! Please update soon!

When Astoria entres the story you call her Daphne. In the books Astoria is younger so you know

Hi! This is very interesting, please! Go on! Tell me what happens next. Who are there? What's going on with Marcus and Oliver?

One point of fact Daphane Greengrass is the elder sister and the one canonically in Harry's year. And Astoria is her younger sister that marries Draco.

This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon

oh c'mon it's been two or three years since your last update.
Pleeeeaseee i need the next chapter!

Please update soon

Please update soon

damn this is funny. i really hope there will be more then 4 chapters.

I am absolutely loving this story and hope theres more on the way.

Please update soon

I'm sure loads of people keep telling you. But this is really good. I can't wait to see where its going and if you'll update anytime soon. Its realy good, and you have a lot of potential as a writer. I noticed your said your re-writing it. And I for one would really appreciate a link with the final publication/updation. Its really good and I hope to be reading more in the future.
Nightingale-Wolf xx

I know it's still on hiatus, I just wanted to drop a note of encouragement and say that I really can't wait to see where this story goes :)

You have an interesting story idea here, I hope you develop it further!