ugh nothing yet?

huh he got masteries at mind magic but can't control his outward emotion? or maybe other fanfic making mind magic overating?

finally a ff where harry "gets" luna. great so far.

I think this is the best fic of it's kind I've ever read! Bravo!

Huh, this is so very curious. Wonder how the Slytherins will react to that. See it as weakness? An opportunity to manipulate? Or be indignant about one of their own being deprived of their world, seeing him as victim. So interesting :-)

This is an excellent time travel AU.

OH MY FUCKING GOD I JUST REALISED WHAT THE LAST CHAPTER IS TITLED AND THERE HAD BETTER BE A BLOODY YEAR BY YEAR.
What I mean by that is nice book. I am enjoying it a socially acceptable ammount, of course.

I've just realised... these bastards let Sirius rot in Azkaban!

I'd tell them all to fuck off, I'm heading off to school in the u.s. have fun with voldemort.

what the fuck harry is just a punching bag and he can't even defend himself? whats the used of his experience if he's just a mere punching bag?

Flintwood?! Really?!good but weird

Interesting concept, executed horribly. For starters, the ‘spell’ that Luna taught him is very overpowered and makes any combat situations you put him in seem utterly pointless, because he could just use that. Second would be you glossing over how they faked their deaths. Third would be you glossing over the whole goblin/contract thing, which doesn’t seem remotely fleshed out. Fourth would be the dialogue between him and Luna... I honestly couldn’t find the flow of it and what was being said made me cringe.

There’s also two smaller things that just annoy me. You’re so intent on making the light side seem bad that you make the Weasleys blame Hermione without an actual in-story reason. Then there is Hermione herself... it looks like you plan on having her be his friend in this still but you completely ignore the fact she knew Ginny had cheated on him MANY times and never told him. That doesn’t sound like a friend to me... that incident also makes Harry seem like an absolute cunt. At the time he was under the impression that he was in a happy, faithful relationship with Ginny and yet he slept with Hermione who is his best friend who just died’s wife.

So what have we got so far? A prick of a protagonist who doesn’t care that his friend never warned him about his wife cheating on him, several inexplicable revelations, a random and very cringe inducing pair and a whole lot of poorly given exposition. I don’t really feel like reading if it’s this bad from the first chapter.

Well? it's been many years, I would think it would be close to finished by now. Perhaps your writing style takes longer than mine.
-Alexander

I love this wonderful wonderful story.

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