Where are the updates for this! This is good and I wanted to read it

Omg the angst! Love it! I really enjoyed how Canada was getting really confident and stood up for himself towards the end! Can't wait for next chapter, please update soo !

This is really good start! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good start! Though, you might want to try using a little bit more puncutation and working on the flow of the story. The words and dialogue seem a bit stiff and forced. Other than that, Its nice. just work on those things a little maybe?

This shows promise, so I like it :) PruCan is one of my favourite pairings ever, so I hope you write them well :D

However, a few times you've changed tenses from past to present, so maybe you should re-read for any mistakes?

Other than that, I really liked reading through this, I'd really love to read through the next chapter soon. So update soon!

Ciao, Mint

this seems very interesting and I really want to read it