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paradoxreader chapter 31 . 4/20/2018 Hope you please continue this cause the suspense is killing me and cant wait to find iut the relati9nship of ruby, lapis and Jade ! |
Guest chapter 31 . 5/20/2017 Continueing on with my theory, here's the next part. About Lapis' blue eyes, they are just Ruby's crimson eyes, just somehow painted over. Being aquanted with the time-travel Pokemon should have made this easy to happen. While I don't think this is the cause of Ruby and Lapis' mysterious sickness, I think that using aromatherapy somehow gets rid of that for a little while, as I stated in my last review that that was a side effect of using aromatherapy on himself. And lastly, the main problem with my theory is that Ruby was transported back in time to during his childhood rather than being teleported away to dress up as Lapis to comfort Sapphire. But that is easily resolved with time travel. By time-traveling, Ruby can appear dressed up as Lapis just one second after he left that time even though that self was him after two days or so. That basically tops off my theory. Also, Sapphire mentioned that he couldn't tell if he was a good liar or telling the truth, in which he is telling the truth if my theory is correct, except about being his own neighbor(lol). Since no one in Goldenrod recognizes him, and everything Lapis mentioned to Sapphire also alligns with ruby's own history, it can be safe to assume that he is Ruby in disguise telling the truth. That is all for my theory of who Lapis is. For the third time, I'm sorry that I posted this even though you don't want me to which you mentioned in this chapter, I really am, but I just really need to get this out and I want to ask you to quickly update this, please! Though this may be useless considering the fact that I think you're dead since you haven't updated not only this, but anything at all for that matter in almost two years. But if you are still alive and well, I ask you to please finish this. That is all. Good luck on your next updates!(whenever that will be) |
Guest chapter 31 . 5/20/2017 I have an idea of who Lapis is. I know that you said or at least implied in here that you do not want any questions concerning Lapis, but you haven't updated this, or anything for that matter in almost two years now, and I'm starting to think that you're dead. I'm sorry, I just really needed to say that. I know this story is on hiatus, but like I said you haven't updated anything at all for almost two years and we would like you to come back and finish your stories, including this one. So please excuse my review here, and let me talk about my theory, not that anyone can stop me now, when I think about it. Again, sorry. My theory is that Lapis is none other than Ruby in disguise. DUN DUN DUN! I know a lot of you are going to have a lot of ifs and buts(haha buts), but trust me it goes somewhere. The first clue is that Lapis keeps hiding the part where Ruby's scars are, because if Sapphire saw them, she would immediately recognize him. The second clue was when they were in Goldenrod city, after Lapis had Xylo use aromatherapy on him, Momo was surprised about something and Lapis immediately knew what it was. That thing was his eyes, the color of his eyes for some reason reverted to their original color, possibly a side effect of using aromatherapy on himself. This was also hinted every time he had Xylo use aromatherapy on him, he would cover his eyes, most likely to prevent anyone seeing his eyes in their original color. One more hint during that time was when Momo came down suddenly being fond of Lapis, most likely because he told her that he was Ruby just in disguise after she saw his crimson eyes. Also, Lapis mentioned that he wanted to "give Momo a piece of his mind" sine the night before, in which he was most probably referring to Momo not letting him princess carry Sapphire, Momo not letting him call Sapphire, Sapph, and the fact that Momo kept watch Lapis and Sapphire sleeping together all night to make sure he doesn't try anything. All these things are things that she would have let Ruby done without any problem, obviously, so that was what he meant by giving her a piece of his mind, telling her that he is Ruby in disguise. Now there are two major things I need to cover up and other minor things that I will cover up along those two in the next review. |
Cindy M 19 chapter 31 . 6/25/2015 Who is Jade? How many years she have? Ruby make her seen very young. |
Kcittenn chapter 31 . 12/25/2014 I hope you get a chance to work on this story soon, its been a long time since I've found a story that has caught my attentionlike this. I adore the story line and the mystery of it. :) |
BuTT0nM4sH chapter 31 . 10/29/2014 I love the story so far. Please update soon . |
diverSEA chapter 31 . 8/19/2014 Hahaha here I am again. I've gotta say I LOVE your franticshipping fics. Your stories have a very intriguing storyline and makes me crave for moooore. I like how you reveal some puzzle pieces here and there to help us readers ponder about the truth behind the phenomenons in the story. And the frantic fluff is reeeally lovely :) Their interactions are very natural, I can see you're not overdoing them. I can perfectly relate to Sapphire's sorrow and anxiety; and Ruby's determination to keep Sapphire safe no matter what is very sweet * I hope that the chaos would end quickly so they can be reunited again! As for Lapis... Just in case you're still having the polls, I think he is Ruby from a parallel universe _ I dunno if I'm foreseeing it right, but a Sapphire-Ruby-Lapis love triangle would be interesting**** (I'm fangirling again...) I'm really anticipated for your update. Plllleeeeease upload another chapter as soon as you can _ p.s. There are some typos here and there, but it doesn't really interfere my reading (my brain has a function to automatically mend the sentences haha). I think it's because fanfiction would eat up some words when you upload your docx file (it happens to me all the time). I suggest you review your story after you upload it onto the site to fix some errors & |
Swoosh15 chapter 31 . 8/14/2014 Since the 7th gym leader is Pryce, Im curious what role you have in mind for him, given the type of person he is in PokeSpecial. Will you reference the things he did in the GSC chapter? Do you have an OC replacement in mind? Anyway, great chapter and I cant wait to find out about Lapis full story and more about the girl |
Vikeila chapter 31 . 8/13/2014 Mew... love that last question. I don't know... people that don't have something and want to know something from others just get me. And If i'll understand the history, everyone will understand it ;) Can't wait. Jade is cute . |
Dead Bones Sam chapter 31 . 8/13/2014 Glad to see lapis is coming clean now, finally! Now to see what rubys been up to! :D |
Vikeila chapter 30 . 7/28/2014 ...freaking questions! Awesome battles though. Rilo is amazing :3 Momo did a great job too. Talo seems like an amazing add to the team and will kick some butt in the next battle :D You write battles differently than me. I'm thinking if I should try to write like that... but I like when trainers shout the moves their pokemon are supposed to execute... Anyways keep it up . too bad I'm looking forward to and reading all your stories, so I have to wait for all of them :D |
Dead Bones Sam chapter 30 . 7/28/2014 Loved the battle scene with lapras hope to see more with him. Keep up the great work! |
Ka-tay's mind chapter 29 . 7/27/2014 Let's see: Jade knows how the whole essence of the weather trio works and Ruby and Lapis are working to figure it out. Lapis had previously dealt with an orb before, I guess. And Ruby had slipped Talo into Saph's bag. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
Ka-tay's mind chapter 28 . 7/27/2014 WE GET TO KNOW THE SECRETS SOON. |
Ka-tay's mind chapter 27 . 7/27/2014 Woah, wild Lugia horde! |