Reviews for woo hoo
Pirika Anna Usui Kyoyama 0116 chapter 17 . 9/7/2017
One of the hottest NejiTen smuts I ever encountered hahah
Guest chapter 18 . 1/13/2017
Who ever threatened you, i guess that guy/girl doesnt even know that there are a lot of smutty stories other than this. Obviously that prick doesnt even know fanfiction well.
Patch-of-Grey chapter 5 . 3/26/2016
As an avid NejiTen fan. I HIGHLY appreciate this. Nice work.
rainyrhapsody chapter 17 . 1/15/2016
i am not going to lie. i am here for the nejiten. i did however skim through most of the other chapters and thoroughly read a few others. but the parts that i did read were fabulous. this is like pure nejiten fluff&smut at the same time not sure how you manage that. oh god. i think im like fangirling so hard right now i cant even think. also the contact names. the contact names *laughs hysterically*
ishxallxgood chapter 11 . 10/3/2015
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
/breathes

Love it. thanks.
Krizzie chapter 2 . 7/26/2015
Ugh sweet naruhina morning -after fluff perfection
jazzberryjuice chapter 9 . 6/23/2015
You're on your school's dance company? Is that like the school competition team/drill team?
I've said this before, maybe in another review or an old PM, but I think it bears repeating: your writing is so uniquely light and has a sort of quirky humor that is just so endearing to me. The tone fits pretty well with all the characters' "fun" exploits!
EroPrincess chapter 16 . 5/16/2015
I've been reading your stories for quite some time and two things I love about your writing:

One - Your signature quirkiness when it comes to the characters. I love your unique style of writing.

Two - You're one of very, VERY few NH authors who writes Hinata as a woman who's sexually aware of what she wants and goes after it. That's very hard to find in NH fics because too many people make her out to be a whimpering wallflower who's too shy to admit what she wants. But you're different in that aspect. Even though Hinata was a virgin in this story, SHE initiated the coupling between her and Naruto. And even in chapter 10, she was able to assert control. And it's refreshing to read about Hinata being a normal WOMAN with normal DESIRES.
Girlalicious chapter 18 . 2/16/2015
Hoes be everywhere ugh. People need to chill
I don't understand the point going around and reporting good stories
Hokori-Hori-Chan chapter 18 . 2/10/2015
Always! These stories are my smutty refreshments so please continue to keep your ass busy! :D
(I don't have ao3 so, if possible, could you please let us know when more "report-award-winning" chapters will come?)

I love the conversations between characters - you have some sick sitcom imagination for making these. Makes me intimidated to review! "x)
All interactions are great, but the thing I've been most curious about is just HOW Naruto and Hinata got together (I believe it hasn't been mentioned? :D)
Guest chapter 18 . 2/9/2015
Ok, so I feel super guilty reading this , but it is soo good! Maybe a bit more NarHina?
Arasia chapter 18 . 2/8/2015
man, that sucks.
i can't believe someone ratted on you, i mean who would want to stop such a great sensual smutty yet sweet story?
it's one of my favourite smut fics on the entire , especially the naruhina and suika.
i've never used ao3 before but i'll try to learn so that i can continue following this!

(p.s. also looking forward to more "put on your warpaint", hopefully!)
MA NOT ALLOWED chapter 10 . 2/8/2015
Hello mellieforyellie:

Did you know the admins publicly announced the following concerning MA content?:

"Please note we would like to clarify the content policy we have in place since 2002. FanFiction DOT Net follows the Fiction Rating system ranging from Fiction K to Fiction M. Although Fiction Ratings goes up to Fiction MA, FanFiction DOT Net since 2002 has not allowed Fiction MA rated content which can contain adult/explicit content on the site. FanFiction DOT Net only accepts content in the Fiction K through Fiction M range. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA and has not been allowed on the site since 2002."

- Post by Admins on June 4th 2012, after deleting 50k MA related content stories

Despite what your feelings/thoughts/ideas etc. are about concerning MA content onsite, it is seriously not allowed here as per their guidelines, rules, and the announcement they made above back in 2012, which still applies to the present. By you posting it, this story(ies), you are breaking their 'No MA Content' rule and are disregarding the admins announcement too. As my username implies, 'MA [CONTENT IS] NOT ALLOWED', be of sexual and/or violence in nature.

Please remember that you agreed to the rules when you created a account here and uploaded any material here. By clicking the statement, 'Yes, I have read and agreed to the content guidelines', you have confirmed to the admins and everyone else that you have read and agreed to their rules and guidelines, this includes the consequences that may follow as mentioned in their rules/ToS.

To make your material compliant, you can do one of the following:

o Move the MA content portion/section, chapter, or the whole story to another site that allows it. Remember to remove the MA content that is here.

o Tone it down to a M or lower rating. Remove any mentions of graphic details concerning body parts, strong physical interaction(s), lemons/smut etc. You can, in lamest terms, make it 'fade to black' and/or not be so graphic. You can also do the following above to keep the 'unedited' version.

o If most of your material has MA content in it and it will take too long to edit, it would be best to remove the later chapters/portions, keep only the first chapter/post and revise that one quickly. Your reviews will NOT disappear nor vanish when you delete and/or re-upload the non-rule breaking chapters. They will still be there. You can also mention that the material is located elsewhere at the end of the chapter as a short author's notes (not stand alone notes) and the link can be found on your profile. That way, those that want to read the edited version can wait and those that do not want to wait or want the edited version can still read that one.

o If you are unsure if this and/or your other material(s) has MA content in it, it is not bad to play it safe by removing/revising etc. the portion(s) and/or chapters you are concerned about. Although, if I am reviewing the material, it does mean that there is MA content in it. Know that by keeping it, your stories and possibly your account would be at risk. Sometimes the admins deletes accounts, be one rule breaking story on it or not.

Thank you for reading,

MA NOT ALLOWED AKA "Manall"

NOTE 1: I am not part of any groups on this site or anywhere else. If you heard or hear or read elsewhere that I am part of a group or otherwise, it is false. If I do not state it on my profile or substantial evidence is not provided or it was not stated by me personally, it is false until proven otherwise.

NOTE 2: My private messages are on, but it does not mean I will respond and/or reply at all. I will not repeat/argue/debate etc. if it about you creating/coming up with excuses of why your unedited/original MA material should stay etc.

NOTE 3: Others that see this review and know they have this kind of material and you decide to deliberately block me, I will instead report and email them your rule breaking and/or illegal material immediately and provide proof that blocking me was to avoid being reported, and therefore, showing malicious intent to continue the rule breaking actions (AKA 'reporting invasion'). Please know that it does not not block anyone from reporting stories, account or not.

NOTE 4: Please know that your story(ies) will still be added to my community and will only be removed when the material has been made compliant. Feel free to PM me if that occurs with proof. I do always check.
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
Thank you for NejiTen but. Oh my god I just cackled out loud at "this is what her gene pool branched from"
Love how you characterized Neji and Tenten - such a joy to read. And hash browns omg. Thank you!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/8/2015
Damn. This is too hot
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