Reviews for We Loyal Traitors
darkeshayde chapter 11 . 4/24/2019
beautiful story, and I love how you wove the relationships between all the characters and managed to tie all the shows main characters (in some cases by one generation) together. The Crystal Cave was a touch of genius, "the place where magic itself was born"- and where magics future champion was apparently conceived- great tie in!-
and for once I've now FINALLY read a fic where a CREDIBLE explanation of Merlin's neckerchief came from that isn't all tongue and cheek. Well done!, and thank you for such a great story.
Adele chapter 11 . 8/21/2016
This is an awesome story. I t would be great to go au and have Baltimore free Kilgarah, come back and get Hunith and Merlin Then find another place o live like the Fisher Kings palace. Merlin could even have brothers and sisters.
MonJoh chapter 11 . 6/12/2016
This was good. I have not read other "origin" fics but something pulled me to this one and I am glad. I wondered if the idea came from Mary Stewart's Merlin and the Crystal Cave where he had visions of his mother, Princess Niniane, and Ambrosius as well as himself and Nimue/Niniane but from your note I guess not.
Linorien chapter 11 . 6/26/2014
Aww that is so perfect. I really loved all the little references to events in the series you dropped in here. The neckerchief, the carving, and especially Hunith's funny feelings. Lovely story.
Linorien chapter 7 . 6/26/2014
I have a feeling Merlin would be mortified if he knew this had happened in the crystal caves. He might have flat out refused to go back there ever again.
Linorien chapter 3 . 6/26/2014
The beginning of the neckerchief!
lissette.medwig chapter 3 . 12/30/2013
I really like Balinor and Hunith together.. A prequel...You do an amazing job! Thank You for your gift of writing so beautifuly !
Guest chapter 11 . 9/22/2013
That was lovely :D :3
chele the original chapter 11 . 9/18/2013
What an excellent story.
[Even without Merlin til
the end.]
Guest chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
I've never read a Balinor/Hunith story that is as good as this one
The Potters of the Future chapter 8 . 9/16/2013
Wonder what Hunith's friends will say about Balinor
The Potters of the Future chapter 7 . 9/16/2013
Hunith and Balinor are sweet
The Potters of the Future chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
Balinor's quite like Merlin
sjritts chapter 11 . 9/15/2013
A sad ending but we all new it was coming from the start. Over all a wonderfully written look at a part of the Merlin story that hadn't been touched. Merlin always had a connection to the Crystal Cave and this was a perfect fit for how he became the man he would be. Looking forward to more from you in the future.
sjritts chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
New it was Will.
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