other people interference to someone budding relationship are always the trigger for destruction.

Idiots. Hazelle is getting what she wants. destroying what feeble connections of two mad prisoners had.

Congratulations!
I’m off to buy it right now :)

Now that was a story and a half.
It was well written and definitely different to anything I’ve read in this fandom before. Great job

I was just floored by this story. It was completely amazing. Every time I thought they were safe, you go taking my breath away again. Thank you so, so much for writing it! This site is richer because you did.

woah this is amazing

Love it so much!

unexpected appearance of Weiryn. You make quite a habit of surprising me ;)

The idea about the shoes was cute, especially that Daine doesn't know how to walk in them.

Interesting, exotic way to describe their magic

I'm wrapped up in your story - no way denying that.
Though when I've clicked on it I expected something brighter - you labeled it 'Adventure/Romance' after all. Those parts might still come (I'm not that far into the story obviously), but till now 'Dark/Angst' would be a better description. Maybe you could warn people a little before they're caught up in your story. (Sure in your summary it says mature content which this most certaily is, but so often that only meant sex).
Sorry for the criticism, I hope you don't get it wrong.
It is a very good story which I enjoyed to read this far.

OMG what a fantastic story! You've captured Daine's nature perfectly and you've written it beautifully. I felt as though I was there with them, inside their heads the whole time! It was captivating to read thank you so much for writing it!

Absolutely beautiful!

i love this fanfic i finished it in 2 days but i wish the baby had come before you ended it

I really, really enjoyed this story. I could not stop reading it and went late into the night until I couldn't read anymore and basically finished it in 24 hours. It was dark, but the story and the development of the characters were the perfect balance. I'm glad you added Alanna into this story and your original characters fit very well. The way you ended was so sweet and beautiful. Your writing is superb!