Ahh thank you for this magnificent piece of art. I loved the mini story and loved how accurately you portrayed the characters! Cant wait for more!

This was very good. I like Neal pushing back on Peter's judgments. Peter was too quick to label Neal. I like El jumping in to explain that she doesn't want to see Neal hurt either, that he is important too. Thanks for writing.

Very good story

Love this fic. Very cute. I like that Neal stuck up for himself and got Peter to apologize.

I love love loooved this fic! I loved the flow of things and I didn't mind not knowing about the case at all! In fact all I cared about was the conflict between Peter and Neal. Keep writing!

Congratulations on your 1st attempt at writing WC fan fic. You did a nice job. I liked the way you used El as a buffer and to say the things Peter couldn't. Good luck with any future stories.

Great Job!

I liked I loved the kicked puppy line

Hey there, I really enjoyed your little fic here and I look forward to read more from you.

Wow loved this! Such an awesome and creative idea! The characterization was great and it was just so sweet! Neal's speech about why he took the bullet for Peter was so adorable! And El's bit at the end was so touching! 3 Great fic. :)

It was lovely. So adorable.
And emotional too, poor Neal being put with his father, only Peter. But good that they sorted it out.
And El always there to show her love for both of them.

Nice job!

Very sweet, and some good writing. Hope to see more from you.

Good job...you got it right!

I love it. I love that type of story, Beautiful!