The term is wrong, it should be snow - KANGAROO.

Please update soon this story is awesome.

Is this going to update soon...? I get that this fandom's pretty dead but... I can't help loving this story and dying for more... Keep up the good work! Even one update would make me really happy. -

Hope to read more soon I really like this story!

Love this story... Please update. They're so cute. Jack gets to go to school and them causing mischief... Hahaha.
I also find it funny how the two oldest characters are kids.
Nightlight... Not being Jack is cute too. How did they seperate from each other? I'm glad he can still communicate with. The moonbeams.
Jack, has a habit of telling everyone the truth without people really working it out. Are they going to realise they're actually the real spirits? I think the twins have and are keeping it a secret.
Brotherly between them is so cute... I wish Jack wasn't the one to get hurt...
Like how Drake isn't as evil in this as other stories. He can be a good person when given the opportunity.
Them pranking Harry... Can't wait see if he gets out of trouble.
Will you do a sequel?
Ja ne. ️

As a rat owner, I'd like to say that rats, if properly cared for, could live up to three to five years. Five, if they're happy and healthy. Rats are great pets to have, too. Loyal ad a Hufflepuff and smart as a Ravenclaw. Seriously, they can get depression and have the memory of an elephant.

, I dOn'T fEeL tOo GoOd

Of course the guardian of joy takes the biggest hit from Dementors’ ‘aura of despair’.

Me gusta tu historia continua con ella me emociono por saber el final

This is lovely. But please just go back and check for grammar. That kills it a lot, just go and try darling. Your story is so amazing and has a lot of creativity, but grammar kills. Don't ignore this please, I hate grammar. I really hate it. But that is what my friend is for (they're a grammar nazi, and a spelling nazi. They get me all the time, sometimes it's embarrassing). So, if you don't have a grammar/spelling nazi friend just run this thing through spellcheck like a hundred times then BOOM! AMAZING Story in just two minutes.

OH MY WORD THE RANGER'S APPRENTICE ARE MY FAVORITE BOOKS AH THIS IS AMAZING!

This is so adorable; I can't even

Please update! This is a great story!

fantastic!~~~~~~0

Problems?
Please, you write better than people WITHOUT dyslexia.