Not a Sakura fan myself

This story seriously needs some plot. It would be cool if maybe Kakashi either knew Naruto's parents or falls in love with her and wants to save her. It would even be cool if he stalked her. I picture Sakura with fake boobs, too much make up and a bad personality

So much for no kissing.

This is the best thing ever.

.Wow

I'm sorry but this so poorly written.

Please go read some actual good stories before attempting your own.

There is a lot of room for improvement...

Was so happy to see an update. Even better it had Itachi in it. Let the drama begin... :D

So hot, love it!

Yes! It's the sexy older brother. Love love. Yum

O.O just found this story
THIS IS AMAZING
It's so well written, very graphic and very telling of every character! I love it! The scenes with the Akatsuki and Naruto are by far my favorite!

So happy you updated! Love it. Love it. Love it! I hope you continue to do so, as this fic is one of my guilty pleasures!

I wasn't expecting an update but was so happy to see that your had!can't wait for anot her update

any pairings? Shipping Itachi x Naruto

Overall, your story is a great read especially on this site. Smutty, hot, and a total turn on? Hell yeah. That being said, the quality of your writing could use some polishing. Your word choice and sentence structure feel blocky and don't flow well. It feels unrefined. Almost as if we were reading the first draft. You tend to forget words and write in the distinctive "fanfiction" style where ellipses become pauses and the nuance of language is forgotten. Writing in this way is not a bad thing. It helps a developing author create a working draft with a moving plot. A proof-reader and an editor would help mature and polish your work. Maybe even take a creative writing class at a community college if you can. They can really help you find and develop your own writing style. Your writing now is fun to read and shows the effort you put into your work. All I'm saying is that with a little polishing your work and writing could go from good to great. Anyways, thank you for taking the time to share this and I'm looking forward to any future chapters.

You're back?! And with some Itachi/Naruto? Yessssss~ now I just need to know how Sasuke is gonna react to all of this because I know it's gonna be sweet!

So lovely. I like porn right away when I read a story that means they can get to know each other again later.