Aww :( that was sad. Nicely written :D

That was pretty deep, and I was actually really into this. It would actually be nice to see this story in Randall's perspective, regardless of how dark it could be.

I really enjoyed this one-shot! It was well written and your oc was interesting as well as the details we learned about Randall on the way.

Good stuff!

I don't think I've ever read any of your fics before, actually..! For some reason. Hm. I better change that - I didn't even know you you had an account here. (Nice of you to pay so much attention to others, Autumn, wow)
*slaps self*

Anyway. This was really good, and I liked it! :)
Honestly, I thought I wouldn't care for this since Randall isn't even technically in this story, but you created a very good picture of him just by decribing his apartment. Good job! :D

It was really sad too, btw. Reminded me of this newspaper article I read in a Norwegian paper a couple of years ago, about finding out who a dead man (whos funeral no one came to) had used to be. It was so sad and yet so well written.

Looove the story. Randall is my favorite character in Monsters Inc. I also like to think that he wasn't entirely bad. And your style is awesome. Love it. Keep writing. Especially Randall stories ;)

holy bananas i LOVE this story. and i love your vision for randall's apartment.

i always wondered what happened regarding randall after the events of monsters inc. did nobody care? did mike and sully just say "oh yeah, we banished him" and that was okay with everyone? and your story addresses so many of my unanswered questions about randall's disappearance and how it was dealt with.

also, your writing style is just really great. this is great. you rock. thanks.

Very moving, and I find your view of Randall being truly alone intriguing. I like the way you described Randall's apartment: it fits him quite well. Every aspect of it suits the lizard and his lifestyle. The medicines he takes are anti-stress and help him sleep; he has no time to cook, so he has to rely on ready-meals and fizzy drinks; also because of his tight schedule (and lack of money, perhaps?) , his apartment lacks books, pictures, ect. But despite the lack of decoration, he still has a photo of his parents, the only ones who really loved him. You did an excellent job with this, and I hope you will continue writing these brief but moving pieces of literature.

Love, love, love this so much. I'm totally with you when it comes to the idea that Randall was very alone in the world, and that once he'd been banished, there would hardly be any sign that he existed in the first place. In fact, it's one of the reasons why I feel for him so much (even if it is a bit of an assumption- but it seems like a fair one).

Anyway, back to your one-shot. I liked Krieger and how you gave a few hints about his character in order to flesh him out, but at the same time placed the focus firmly on Randall. Your writing style is great- lovely to read, enough description so that the reader can see everything in their mind's eye, but not over-complicated. Would love to see more like this from you!