I feel weird for liking this

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Yes. Just Yes

Yeah... I guess sometimes Fetish Comes First...

And it wasn't weird Fetish after all.

That was HOT by the way...

*dabs at nosebleed* Damn...

AMAZING! Blood tastes so wierd when I comes from your nose... Yes, some of the blood spilled into my mouth.

Never say enough to smutty USUK XD
Moreover, it's so hot and deliciously dirty! Sooo yummy! And no purple prose nor awkward, or weird, euphimism to boot! Booyeah!

USUK Also, welcome to the citrus-y side, we have cookies. Lemon flavored cookies

I think it was a successful attempt! :) Especially since it's only the second one. :O
Well, it was nice to read, though the sad thing is that it was rather short! I wish it was longer and with more elaborate details. Personally I like little details (like when it's mentioned that a character has, for example, heavy breathing, their hair sticks to their wet with sweat forehead, the heart beats crazily blah blah), when it's described the way they feel (physically, emotionally) and what they think. But! This is my preference. Some masters write great smut without almost any detail at all. I guess it's more about making it all sound realistic? Well, I guess that's what makes a story more attractive to me.
I'd suggest finding tips on the internet on how to write smut, but then again, everyone has a different opinion and tastes. However, you may find some tips that will work for you!
Anyway, yeah, good job! :) I think you can continue exploring this type of fiction very well. 8D

That was hot. Definately a great lemon. Continue on with the lemons/limes. :D

Wow amazing lemon! Keep writing more! :)

Oh,
Definitely you should continue to explore more citrus side of fanfiction
It was awesome u

THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE BEST FICS I HAVE EVER READ!

Hehehe that was really hot and sexy :) that is definitely going to go into my faves!