Fou ruined this fic. Can't stand her

Fou is the most obnoxious type of girl. Being gay being apparently Allen's only trait in her eyes.

Awesome!

When I read this the first go around it was pretty good and sucked me in. But after going back I came to realize how OC everyone was. And then I realized again that nobody on this entire website can make a character hold a grudge against someone or something properly. And that the transition from it is never smooth. My thing how cringy everyone was. This is still a great story but just not for me though.

Im literally so in love with this story I've read it probably 20 times now. You should really consider a sequeland also more neah and allen scenes 33 keep up the good work my man

You know it would've been an awesome idea if you made it more realistic. I feel you're too easy on Lavi. Even if Allen did have a crush on him long ago, the four years worth of hurt would definitely be harder to get rid of. Not to mention his crush would've been all but nonexistent by then. It's not like he loved Lavi. Lavi was just someone he admired and dreamed to be like and I think getting his high-school life practically ruined because of him... well, I don't think the admiration would survive that long. And I understand that you want them to get together as soon as possible but c'mon, be realistic. Another thing is that whenever I see Lenalee... something akin to disgust bubbles inside me. Which is kind of understandable, but I've always been able to tolerate her for the sake of the story... here however, even the mention of her is nauseating. All in all I have more than enough reason to drop this story. And what a shame really. I had been looking forward to reading this after reading the summary. Not to mention I adore Laven. But I guess I have find another story now... What a waste.

Lavi is really mean char he hurting Allen so many times but glad he's happy in the end

I loved this story it was really good u should write a sequal

That was just... Wow.

The ending to this a was really good, and. I really enjoyed reading it :D

I freaking love this story :-) I've read it 3 times already! :-)

I just HAD to leave a review! I loved this story so much I called off work just to finish reading it in one day! This is definitely going onto my favorites list to be read over and over and over. I just thought Lavi and Allen were so cute together and it was about time they got together towards the end. I almost died when Allen got hurt at the end and cried because Lavi was so distraught from those people hurting Allen. *Cries* You are a brilliant writer and I am going to go check out your other stories!

*Crystal teats of joy* I have been reading this non-stop and i'm just so HAPPY! Ugh. Now I will miss reading this perfect fan fiction... I can't even express with words how much I love this! I know it'sounds been like YEARS since you finished this, but eh. One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Great job and I will be reading all your other stories~

Wouahh c'était trop trop bien, g adoré la fic du début à la fin, continu a nous faire rêver

this was a perfect ending to a perfect fanfiction XD I loved it so much XD

Here. * throws you glitter magic wand* Now you can summon all of the glitter you want. Enjoy.