Love it. thanks.

Very well written! :)

Aww, love this. Every word.

More please

Oh this is just hilarious on Clara's part and sweet on the married couple's.

More please. 12River is my new love. Also:

Brilliant in-character dialogue throughout - I can *so* hear Clara saying this:

"Oh. Eugh. Clara still here. Clara still very much in the room"

and River saying this:

"Since your height is much the same slapping you should be fine".

Thank you!

:D

I really like this. I think you should do an adventure one with river,12, and Clara cute and job.

Love it! It's wonderful

that was really good! i can't wait to see River again on the show... lol they really are both going to look as if they are her parents! great job!

cute. looking forward to more

Very nice. Words can't describe how much I like it. It wasn't as I expected it to be, but I was pleasantly surprised! In fact, I even enjoyed Clara's presence in the scene. Now that it's established that he belongs to River, regardless it doesn't feel as awkward as it would have otherwise. Yes, I have to agree with River that Twelve is a good substitute ( or at least you've convinced me enough to make me believe).

Finally, thank you for reuniting River and her sweetie, regardless of his incarnation.

It made me smile :)

Yep, definitely hard to picture at the moment, but I quite enjoyed it all the same.

I lol'd at Clara's reaction. :)

I like it. Keep smiling. :-)

First time reading a Twelve fanfic with the new guy, and I have to say, you aced it! :D