quite interesting, and even more funny as NO ONE EVEN TRIES TO QUESTION THE LOGIC OF ADDING A CARD GAME TO YOUR SCHOOL PROGRAM. (as this world was created as a resolt of a duel, i guess duels decide evrything [ /Main/DuelsDecideEverything] is in effect lol)

Yaaa finally you update! I was waiting already .

Hm... Sorry i never get tagline ha... But as always great chapter

Nice freaking story.

Nice Chapter, my friend. I think this was a good way to conclude the Tag Duel. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and the appearance of the Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's cast.

I liked it. For Isaac and Revelry, it got SUPER close. I was thinking that you had changed your mind but NOPE! Like I said, the journey to the destination also counts.
But I'm also keen for the next chapter, Touma and your OCs talking about their dueling spirits. That as well as the characters from 5D's, you clearly put a lot of thought into the duels and the characters. But...that wormhole? I'm still interested.
Not only that, it kind of squealed when you mentioned Gungnir. I was like "HOLY SH-" But still, although there was no spear (although there was Forbidden Lance) we still got a dragon. No complaints.
Accelerator too. Now that he had a deck, I'm glad to see how it would play out if it would. And Aogami. You certainly do have a knack you talking about his fetishes. What would he too to Effect Veiler...? I can't even imagine.
But thanks for keeping up with the story and any time I can help, I will do so. Good luck and keep it going!
Mr ?

Good writing, mate. Carry on.

Tis is an interesting story; you kept the characters in check and even had their decks compliment them! The OCs are an excellent addition to the story, unlike the Stus that I've read on other fanfics . . .

Please, continue this wonderful story! I've been reading your TAMNI/YGO fics since "A Certain Duelist's Dream 1 & 2". I want to see Yusei and the 5D's gang in this story!

Nice freakin fanfic.

Interesting to see the Misaka Network make an appearance. But I do have a question, from the perspective, it seems that this story will be told both from Touma's as well as your OC's. Not that I have a problem with that, just a comment and a good job about bringing in your own characters into the story,
But I can't help but think that there's something hidden under the surface here just waiting to pop out. Is there some ulterior motive for Aleister? Or something else?
Overall this chapter is good as it allows one to slowly get more involved in the dueling style and the amount of character interactions there are as well. I see what you did with Uiharu and Saten...maybe they'll make a greater appearance later on?
Also...this is just an idea but if the Duel Monsters are a sort of twist of reality in how they appear, then how will Imagine Breaker work here? Just something that popped into my head.
Continue with the good work and I hope that the next chapter comes up soon!
Mr ?

So The sisters enter the fray... yay XD

Your OC's are good creations for the story.

And everyone is kept in character... Thats it my friend! Keep up the good work!

Good Chapter.

Hello, it's me J; I'm here to review your latest chapter:
Is this your first time writing a tag duel? I did see some calculation errors, but not too serious. In regards to writing YuGiOh fanfics, I find you . . . unique.
It's because the cards the characters are using are adhering to the OCG/TCG rules. Other fanfic authors that I've read their stories just use fan-made cards or the anime effects of cards. Your accuracy to OCG/TCG effects is among the factors that made your story stand out among the rest.
I patiently await the conclusion of this epic tag duel!

Due to the hectic college schedule that I have, I'm terribly sorry that I haven't written a review on this awesome story!
Anyway, down to business, Touma vs. Mikoto? This duel is interesting . . . Mikoto used a Watt deck? Well, I did watch the ToAru/YuGiOh fan-crossover videos, so that would made sense.
What's interesting is that the duel ended in a tie. Perhaps it would be resolved in a later duel? I hope you'd consider that in the future. Anyway, it's a good chapter; I'll review the next one.

You made a mistake. You didn't reduce Light End Dragon's attack after it used its effect on Mermail Abysslinde. It wouldn't have been able to beat Hyper Psychic Blaster the way it did here.

Other than that, this duel is awesome.

This was an excellent chapter, my friend. You handled it with grace and I'm looking forward how you'll conclude it in part 2.

By the way, don't beat yourself up when it comes to lack of support. I know how you feels when it comes to that, but don't let it get you down. This is an excellent story with a lot of potential. In time, you'll find a way to truly make this story shine in a way that everyone will enjoy it. Until then, take your time and make sure to have fun while you write.

Until next chapter, this is your friend Spirit Reader signing off.