Whoa. This story is awesome and is so well written! I literally couldnt put my phone down and sleep until i finished reading all 10 chapters. I love how you've included characters from the other Final Fantasys. :) FF7 & FFX are my loves. Lol

*pushes you gently towards computer*
Update soon, ya?

Your story is absolutely amazing! I love it so so much! Please update soon!

Very nicely done! I loved the chapter!

Yaaaaay floods

One thing for you to work on. I find that when I'm reading how you write conversation that I mix up who is saying what. Just try to be a bit more clear! :D

I prefer sad stuff where main characters have to work though all the issue and there is arguing and lots of yelling

I hope the ending you have planned is the one I'm hoping for :3

I really enjoyed this chapter, and I think the moment I'm most waiting for in the fic is the moment when Fang learns about her past with Light. I'm so excited :P

Keep up the good work!

I'm super happy that this story was updated. I really wish more people would read it cause I think this is a great story! Excited for some action next chapter but you have me a bit worried since you said there is going to be a sad part. And I really really hope this story ends happy. It would kill me if it didnt. Anyways hope to see more in February! (And good luck with the rest of your second year!)

Great update, I'm really enjoying this story :)

Counting the days until your next update. Loving this story. Keep up the great work.

Definitely been a while
just glad you haven't gave up to your laziness
Hope you will be update more frequent now
Thanks for the chapters

Excellent chapter, you're moving things along nicely. And I cracked up at the bit about houses. That was clever!

The only thing I found OOC about Light was how often she laughs. Try just having her smile instead, or chuckling at most. Laughing just gives the wrong impression

I'm glad you updated, even if it took a few months. And if you update in December...I suppose that'll be an improvement XD

I like more on the Drama then on the Fluff. I think with Lighting it's always more to do with being in control with her emotions and Fang is always there to break it down and make her let it go. Maybe show some frustration on Lighting's end cause her mind is not the one in control her heart is. Also maybe you can alternate some Lighting and Serah chapters and build up to a point to where they do finally call each other. Though with Lighting I think she will need some pushing from Fang and with Serah she might need some pushing from Snow and Lebreau. Anyways thanks for the update.

cool story

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You stopped there? Really? You have seventy seven people waiting for new chapters of this story! That's a number most of us including me would kill for! And you're just stopping there?!

Sigh...I know you probably won't update, but c'mon, it's summer. Surely you can find the time to give us another chapter? This right now is my favorite FF13 fic, you're an excellent writer and you have a unique story that makes me want more! So in the name of the now 78 fans, could you give us a chapter?

This was perfect...that neighbor sure was annoying! Great job on that encounter and really representing how Gran Pulse and Coocunians view eachother, the regular citizens atleast, it shows the effect of the war. I looove it! Aaahhh they kissed! And the piercing part, lol, you have a great sense of humor, that knock knock joke as well, it kills me.

They finally kissed! It's a bit sad that Fang pretty much doesnt have a clue who Lightning really is and I hope that both sisters can resolve their problems of each other.