Come back please!

Accurate assessment.

LOLing this whole chapter. Well done.

Even if Charlie had engaged in “dalliance” with the Bros, a Martian mouse Cannot impregnate a Terran woman.

I hope you're not abandoning this; it's been over a year since you've posted an update...

“I think that you shouldn't stop where you have!”

I like this. Please continue! :)

All in all, I think this is a pretty accurate depiction of the absolute (literal) blast Charley would have on Mars.

(bounces excitedly in seat) Can we see Charley with little martians? Can we see Charley cuddling/playing/napping with little martians?!

Dude, what if there was an attack on the base and it's clear that this is going to be a shit show? As a last ditch effort, the mice nervously hand their kids over to the human and let her transport their little ones back to earth. Because on the off chance they lose, better on another planet than dead right? And it takes a while to win, and even longer to make the base livable again. But they do it, and a group go back to earth with the boys to get their kids. Except their kids aren't in Chicago. Just a note from Charlie. She's transported the lot of them to that beach house in Florida because it is SO MUCH BIGGER than the Last Chance and she's got a shit ton of martian nibblers and no way does she want them even REMOTELY close to Limburger. And they get to Florida, and the kids are having a ball on the beach. Charlie's actually doing pretty well managing the lot of them. And her parents and whatever other family members are nearby drop in now and again to give her a break and spoil the little tykes rotten. They've all but adopted the lot of them the way they did the boys. Just...

Little martians OK?!

'Wonder if they could Upgrade Modo's bionic arm, too...

Can she upgrade Modo's bionic arm, too?

Maybe you ought to post a chapter or short story, covering what each Bro went through during those 'making stuff blow-up … a lot … in very creative ways'.

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

I wonder, have they ever seen the BBC's "Walking with Cavemen"?

Reading this reminds me of an idea I have for a story; a BMfM/Scanners (Cop) film, where Charley-herself is a powerful Scanner.

The idea is for when there is a clash of telepathic abilities; the scene in the first episode, where Throttle uses his telepathy to show Charley his and the others' back history... only for Charley's telepathic ability reacts, causing nose-bleeds all around...

Charley: "If I'd known you were gonna try something telepathic, I would have warned you about feedback."

And then she'd have to show-&-tell the bros about how Scanners came to be...

What do you think?

:)