Great. And it actually belongs in the friendship genre unlike a lot of others.

This story was so cute and funny, I couldn't stop giggling throughout the whole chapter xD
I really loved it (and I want something like that to happen in the anime...that would be soo cute). And besides: Gray's arm around her? I see my ship all over again~
Anyway, thanks for that magnificent Oneshot -

Good one shot! I love Team Natsu sleepovers.

Aw, cute.

I couldn't stop laughing (mostly at the ending). At least she will never be lonely :P

Awwww, I don't know if I should laugh because it's so funny or clutch a pillow because it's just adorable.

Oh the mental images from Happy's chart... Funny story!

Awww, the mental images inspired by this one-shot are so cute! I absolutely love team-fics, and I thought you captured all of their personalities really well! Yay Team Natsu! :D I loved this story, and I hope you keep up the excellent work and write more for this fandom!

Hello there. Thank you for your entry, and no worries, you’re right on time. I’m the one who should be sorry for reviewing so late. Alright, no beating around the bush from me; congratulations for winning the very first challenge round!

First off, technicalities. I’m going to commend you for being the cleanest entry in terms of grammar, punctuation, with not even a single careless typo as far as I could see. You have a way with words that is both fun and easy to read, which makes for quite an enjoyable experience. Another interesting mention was how the narrative also managed to portray Lucy’s own emotions, from stressed to frustrated to affectionate, with the way it was written. I didn’t mind the short ending. It was short, sweet, straight to the point, and adhered to the nature of the rest of the story.

Everything just seems so natural. Everyone’s well into character, though when Erza was asking Lucy to punish her, I was getting some Virgo vibes. Not necessarily a big thing, since she does have the tendency to say strange and violent things as such anyway. Aside from the props on Lucy, you’ve also managed to capture Natsu and Gray’s brash and careless idiocy in a way almost worthy of Mashima.

In terms of creativity, again, well done. It’s a simple concept, yes, but the fact that it is so means that not many people choose to think about it. You’ve turned it into an easy piece of art that many will enjoy. You’ve done Team Natsu’s rather weird but infinitely strong sense of camaraderie justice. Applause is in order. Again, congratulations for the win. For your prize, you can determine what ever theme, pairing, setting, or prompt will be used for the next challenge.

great!

Gray's arm wound around her Gray's arm wound around her Gray's arm wound around her .../

Cute, fluffy, and cute! Ahhhhh! :3 I miss these kind of stories! Awesome write-up as always, author-san! I just adore how you write!

great story author-san