Awesomeness

Um, you had Harry healing Cedric in the first few paragraphs, but then with Peter, he apparently 'knows no healing spells'. Bit of an issue. If Harry's thoughts were meant to be more cuttingly sarcastic, in that he doesn't care much about healing Peter, it doesn't quite come across that way.

Otherwise, a rather interesting story. It did feel a bit rushed at the end, but the concepts were fun.

Thanks for the chapter _.

Well, that is a different happy ending. And actually, it's happier for Tammy, too. Power never seems to bring a true happiness. I agree that Harry would do better with a competent, challenging LI.

I do appreciate that the darker characters who had ample screen time, just dwindled into meaninglessness and lack of relevance. (Snape, Durseleys, and Snape) Riddle got a new life, and everyone else got to live normal lives. Tho I do wonder if Harry ever fessed up or Tammy remembered? They certainly were linked, :D and didn't seem to mind now. Good job.

Great story as usual.

Quick question, why did you have Harry use fire and lament that he didn't know any healing spells when he healed Cedric with Episky before taking the cup?

And what you did to Tom Riddle is so much worse than what Snape was planning for Lily in 'Well, you've done it now'.
Seriously, forcibly changing someone's gender then teaching him to hold one person above all and act in a way that person wholly approves off.
And after that marrying that guy you just genderchanged and brainwashed.

T'is a horrible thing to do.

good but some words were spelt wrongly.

this is a very cool one-shot! i like how harry handled everything, thank you hermione for awakening his sense. the only thing that i was less enthusiastic about is the ending, it seems a bit rushed, and maybe even largely unneccesary after a certain point.

anyway, i loved it! (_)

Esta muy buena la historia, un cambio total y radical en la trama.

Nicely done! I've never seen this take before, and must say I'm quite impressed!
Kudos to you for originality! Even better, it is well written as well!

I like Harry's paranoia at the beginning it makes sense from the story perspective that he really ought to be paranoid by then. He's a bit overpowered, but not so much that it harms the story.

All in all I would say I enjoyed it, but the pacing was very fast. I fall into the very same trap myself and end up pulling my stories to try and make them longer and the pace just a bit slower.

Interesting way to deal with the prophecy too.

That's a way to end it that I haven't seen before. There are plenty where they fall in love at the end, but it's always Harry, Never Tom.

Thank you for writing this. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for something like this.

I loved the story. But, it was a bit weird having Harry raise Tammy, treat her like a twin, and then marry her. Or, at least, you could have explained how it happened.

Fun stuff again.