Hey,

Discovered this fic yesterday and started reading it today.
Great 17 chapters you've written so far, can't wait to see what comes next!
I like the snippet-like approach you've taken for this, seems oddly appropriate for Skyrim.

Any chance you'll be introducing the cure for vampirism? Or is the existence of it something that should be ignored for this story? Both options are fine, I'm just curious.

Cheers,
Wizco

It's a very interesting story!

On a side note though, why does it feel like there are so many replicas and paragraph endings with missing words, sentences even?

Please keep this sotry alive :P

Jolly good!

Old man! Man I thought you died or gave up on writing, but I read your authors note at the beginning of the chapter and I gotta day, I’m glad. Not glad on the fact that you and your team got set back quite a bit, but happy that you didn’t leave us, I read this story from start to finish and I gotta say, Even though I never played Skyrim or Elder Scrolls, this is an amazing story as always old man. Hold SHIT?! You almost got eaten by a shark, that makes you BOMB 2 the . COM, makes me think about where you live if you’re encountering sharks, I live in Arizona, so the largest body of water we have is a river. Old man, it’s good to hear from you, stays safe and take your time with the chapters, we’ll get them when we get them, just make sure they’re up to par on your writing, you’re stories are amazing, be safe old man!

ohhhh the wait was so worth it...but now i need more, MOAR i say!

seriously tho, i love this story, as i do the rest of the ones you have posted.

i hope you get well soon, being sick is never a fun thing to go through

even more so with this whole covid crap going on

again, love the new chapter, until next time

Asco,asco,asco,asco,asco,asco,asco,asco

It was nice to read more of this after a few years have passed, given that the last time I read it was probably around chapter 7 or 8

Man i just never tire of reading your stories they are soooo goood you know how to write connections my dood

The only thing that could have made this chapter better... was a Black Soul Gem. Yes Grelod, suffer inside of this gem... perhaps I'll use you to enchant a kettle... or a broom... or perhaps a Children's Doll! YES! The irony would be perfect!

Would you kindly go fucking kill yourself you shithead nazi?

Very enjoyable read from start to finish I can't wait for more chapters to come and enjoy

holy crap, my guy. it's been so long I'll need to start back at chapter one to remember exactly how all the relationships work, but damn will it be worth it. That, or post a clarification about them. I was specifically confused about the little girl being Madara's niece, and who adopted Britte and Sissel. Kind of a mix. Also how Karliah got there. I don't remember her being there when the girls were adopted.

Where to start my friend, well first of all, you writing is top notch as always and I had a balst binging this story, especially since I started another playthrough of skyrim during quarantine, so this story really hit me where I like it.

Love your Naruto, love your Dovakiin, love your Serana, love most of this story.

Which sadly brings me to the negative. Firstly, I think that the story is just a tad bit rushed in places, like Naruto adopting a child out of pretty much nowhere and to him finding a lover in Aela as quickly as it happened.

And finally Madara.

*Sigh* Please don't take it the wrong way, I don't believe that it's that bad to have him in the story, my gripe come's from the simple fact that I don't care about him at all. I love Naruto. I still love the pre-shippuden Sasuke. I still love Sakura despite everything that Kishimoto did to her in Shippuden.

But I never, never cared about Madara at all.

I overall love this story, I love Naruto as a character in it and seeing you breath life into the different Skyrim characters is wonderful, especially since I'm playing the game as we speak. But to then switch to Madara, and not only switch to Madara, but also you writing him as if we or I as a reader should somehow give a damn about him...I really don't like those parts of the story.

At first I dearly hoped that Madara would be just a, i don't know, short one and done cameo, but you yourself quickly dispatched that notion, and decided to make him an important part to the story...which too me at least really sucks.

Which brings me to my problem with this story...

I love it, it is without a doubt the best Naruto/Skyrim crossover out there, for that you will always have my respect and I will take a look at your other stories after I finish this review.

But while I love this story, your choice of bringing a character I don't care about into this fic is really a downer man. It wouldn't be that bad if Madara was a side antagonist, but it seems like you are either building him up to be another protagonist, or one of the main antagonists.

And I for one, simply don't care for him at all. I don't like him. I don't hate him. To me he is and will always be an undercooked Deus Ex Machina Villain so powerful that not even Kishimoto himself knew what to do with him.

And so far in all my years of reading Fanfiction I have never caught a story that made me think differently. Any story that I've read in which Madara Uchiha was involved ended up becoming a Angsty, Depressing, downright agonizing drama-fest that lacked any kind of satisfying final battle, let alone any satisfying conclusion.

From Naruto becoming Madara's puppet, to Madara being so OP that he walked all over Naruto for the better part of an entire fic, anything I've ever read that even featured that Uchiha's name was bound to become either a depressing angst fic with extra angst sauce, or a power-fantasy where Naruto somehow got ahold of Madara's eyes.

And I'm honestly downright scared that this fic will end up becoming one of those two above. After all, this is already building towards a clash between Naruto and Madara, the Angst is already beginning to fester.

Now all that needs to happen is for Madara to start killing Naruto's loved ones and we are at the point where this story stop's being unique. Because then it simply turnes into the old spiel of Naruto vs. The Uchiha of Your Choice Minions.

And this story is too good and too unique to turn into that.

Dont worry about any negative reviews my man just a bunch of people who could never do something themselves so they spend time tearing others down. Constructive criticism is good flaming though is just for trash people. Keep up with your artistic vision.

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