This was a very moving and well-done character study. Great work!

This was good!

good

This is - very, very interesting.

Great!

10

That was cool.

'They were in the wrong place at the wrong time. Naturaly they became heros.'

I love that line!

him and leia dancing? hehehehehehehee

A delightful and illuminating story. I would love to hear more.

Great story, i think you should add on another chapter or two to it.

hey i loved the fan fic but i really think that you should add on to it and have a little more luke/vader.(please add on to it)

That was really good! I hope you add on more chapters!please?

I do have a question though...do Luke and Leia know that Darth Vader is their father in this story?

You kind of hinted that they did when he said Leia looked like her mother and then when he said he thought he had seen Padme..etc.

But, if they do know that Vader is their father, I would think they would be slightly more eager to learn about their mother.

And I think that Vader would be more upset to talk about Padme than he was.

But this was a really good fanfic, among the better I have read.

This is the truest interpretation of both Vader's and Leia's dialogue I have ever read - simply brilliant.

add on to it!

Lovely story, but the thought of Leia and Vader dancing is comic. A tiny thing like her would only come up to about his bellybutton. Maybe if he hunched over quite a bit and she stood on her tippy-toes ... Nope, still a funny image.