I couldn't put your fic down! Seeing how years have gone by since you've last updated, i hope you are doing well and if you ever choose to continue this story I'll be one of the first in line to read it.

This had so much thought put into it and i am such a fan of prince starscream and the relationship you made between them, somehow in the millions of uyears they might actually be on the same page by the end of this.

Thank you so much for writing this!

This story is amazing! I love the look into a possible past of Starscream and Megatron! Please update and keep up the good work!

Fuckin hardcore tsunderes

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

Megatron you aft stop trying to lock love away from yourself before it's too late for poor starscream and you regret it! Jeez some alien robots really need a boot up the aft before they get a gripe! (Love your story you've got me hanging around for more)

Oh, I'm so glad to see another chapter. I didn't think it was bad at all. Yes, nothing really HAPPENED, but I really enjoy introspection chapters like this one.

I very much look forward to the updated/rewritten version of the story. Wishing you lots of luck with it. I know rewriting a story can be difficult, sometimes even more difficult than writing it in the first place. I eagerly look forward to the results. :)

-Annie-chan

I'm so glad that you came back! I really have always loved your book and I'm just really excited. Thanks for making my day. Keep writing

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

Its updated... wow. Well, I don't understand whats going on anymore, but it read like you still know what you're doing and have a ending in mind. Um... is Elita 1 the main focus now? Is Soundwave- I don't even remember him getting hurt... what?

You totally had me trippingvwhen you said you were having a baby. Hahaha... that bit was funny.

I just don't remember the focus of this story. Megatron still denies that Starscream matters. Ugh. Now he is more concerned about Elita and he beat his TIC to unconsciousness. Starscream is going to have to die for Megs to notice anything. I bet thats where this is going. Starcream propably decided a long time ago that feeling things hurt (besides fragging) and that he would rather just do whatever to please Megatron because his wants and life don't matter cuz life is just set out to hurt him anyway. So he takes a hit for Megatron and then Megs gets enlightened and thats the end. Maybe, sorry I'm rambling. Trying to get back into it. I remember this used to be my favorite story.

Thankfully I read the 15th chapter first because my iPod glitched. So it was easy to figure out the chain of events. I don't remember when I last read this, but apparently it made an impression.
Update soon

Hello there! As the individual who made the comments below me doesn't have an account, I couldn't think of another way to get in contact with them.

So, if you're reading this, thank you for reading my story! But I only felt it fair to assure you that I'm aware that the notes I place in the chapters are indeed exceedingly long, and also to warn you... They get longer. XD However, that said, they are there and will most likely remain there, even if you find them annoying. Though you know, you do always hold the option not to, well, just not read them, right? XD

Anyway, thank you once again for taking the time to read my story. And in the future, if the notes truly do annoy you, you have every right to simply not bother with my obsessive ramblings, and rather just skip to the story itself. :3

Cheers,
Scarlet

Oh my god. The fucking wall of text notes again.

You're fucking notes are longer than the actual story. Can you please not do that. I'd rather read the stories than read about your insecurities.

Seems like I'm always thinking of Soundwave. "In every way." That slagger, he already knows! But he wants Megatron to know too.

Estoy releyendo este fic porque simplemente me encanta, el capítulo 6 es mi favorito, el capítulo 14 también me gusta mucho,el capítulo 15 duro y un poco difícil de digerir. Por otro lado estamos hablando de un mundo en guerra, en la guerra surge lo peor de las personas. Es un fic excelente tiene buena trama, es fluido, y presenta los personajes de una manera muy compleja y completa.

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I'm rereading this fic because I just love, chapter 6 is my favorite chapter 14 I also like, chapter 15 hard and a bit tough to digest. On the other hand we are talking about a world war, in war the worst of people arises. It's an excellent fic has good plot, is fluid, and presents the characters in a very complex and completely.