OH MY GODS! THE FEELS! IT'S SO... I'M SO SAD! IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! I'M DYING INSIDE. YOU HAVE MASTERED MURDER BY FEELS.

Incredible. That was beautiful, and it was a lot more awesome then you though it was going to be, because wow. Only now am I realising how much Silena and Beckendorf deserved to live. Thank you, it was amazing.

Haunting story... you write well. Good Language. But i like your light hearted stories. your sad stories are too sad.

No, no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Yah need to go back and fix that ending ma'am. Thanks. I'll be waiting. Love the story, kind of hate it but love it. But really though. No.

I don't know if you're reading this but I need to say story absolutely blew me away and I laughed and cried.I wish I could write as good as you.I love the message and I think it's the best story you've ever me Amelia

Oh my...I cannot find words to describe this. You made me cry.

You are seriously so amazing I can't even find words to express how much I love your stories. I've read this three times now and the ending is always so sad I cry.

I don't know how to feel about this story.
It's so beautiful and so tragic, the tears aren't even trying to stop. It's written so well and now I feel like sobbing.

Okay I've been wanting to write a review for this story for so long, but I just was never quite sure what to say because it's so good. This is the story that I've told my friends - just go read it, just read it now, it's so good I can't even explain it. I can reread this story again and again, and it breaks my heart every time and that's how I know it's really, really THAT good. I love how the minor characters that are made major characters in this story each have their own plot lines and of course like in any of your other stories I love your writing style - it feels so natural, so easy to read - the dialogue, the pacing, the way the characters' interact, the scene breaks - I can get so easily caught up in your writing. And it's beautiful. It's tragic, and it is tragic in that perfect way - that ending with Clarisse and Charlotte sitting on the bed, knowing that Charlotte's going to die any moment and then the last few lines - there's this frustration because it's so unfair. And towards the end I was so immersed in her story that I could feel how scared, how empty, how confused, how angry, how upset, how awful she must be feeling because she knows she's real and yet she never existed - I actually was feeling that right along with her. And that's how the story is beautiful and haunting. Yes, haunting - that's the right word. Because it felt so real, and it's truly, genuinely sad because it's unfair and awful to everyone involved. And it sort of stays with me, lodged in my heart after I've finished reading it. You are a truly amazing writer, and I am so glad that I was able to experience this incredible story.

WHY AM I CRYING
THE SNEAKY LITTLE ONION NINJAS
THOSE SONS OF HERMES
THEY BE ATTACKING MY EYES
HALP
CAN NOT STOP CRYING
*WAILS*

Damn you. That is all.

Gods of Olympus this is so amazing and I read it like three months ago but I still reread it over and over because it is just so good. Can you write another chapter where this happens again with Percy and Annabeth after the Giant War and one of the lines can be: "Whispers picked up, "Who?," "I'll bet she's an Athena girl," and "What if she's another Juliet Eden Charlotte Jerusalem?" The last one confused her so much."

I really want to hate this story.
But I can't.
It is too beautiful, and thoughtful, and real, and perfect to hate.
But I really wish I could.
So, bravo to you, HecateA, you have created a story that I can laugh, and cry and read over and over again.
Come to think of it, all your stories are like that.

I really want to hate this story, but I can't because it's too beautiful.

This is the best story I've read in any fandom on any site. This is very powerful and well written. I didn't cry reading The Fault In Our Stars, but I cried during this. Good job!