This story was so great! A quality, complete, fanfic centered around an imperial is all I could have hoped for. Even though he defected, this story was great on so many levels. It was dark, but not too dark, and had very believable characters. It seemed very realistic, and told the Imperial side of the war very well. While I wish you would continue the story, I'm excited to see what you do with these characters in the future.

And so it ends. He finally did it. I was surprised how Upper Cut reacted. But I liked the ending. There is enough tragedy in the Galactic Civil War.

This was a good story that had a very conventional feel to it. Probably the best imp story featuring stormtroopers I have read. Al though I am slightly disappointed in S-Man's final actio (being skeptic all about the benign nature of the rebellion), I am pleased that Upper Cut stayed loyal, even if he breached regulations. I dare say he two may meet again, if S-Man's story continues.

I just hope that he becomes at least slightly disillusioned with the rebellion. Not all of the rebels can be good, just as not all imps are cruel.

I think this might be the best Star Wars fanfiction I've ever read. I mean that literally. This was incredible to read and I loved every minute of it.

Can't wait to see where this goes next.

I enjoy your story. You are one of the few writers that take it to a personal level have good success with it.

He finally did it. He broke. I think we've all been waiting for this. I love the true sense of war that you are able to convey. There is good character development here also. Keep it up.

Good descriptions of battle. Makes me think they may be a little inspired by the game Star Wars Battlefront. (But perhaps not).

It looks like S-Man finally cracked.

You give a very favourable view of the rebels in this chapter. However, in many cases they may be just as ruthless as the imps.

I wounded if the middle aged man with the droid S-Man aimed at is the protagonist from your other story.

In this story, you have almost convinced me to stop cheering for the Empire. Almost.

This just got a whole lot more interesting. Hope to see more soon.

Interesting. You focus on the imperial side of the battle, I like it :)

It is interesting the S-Man considers why the rebels were so keen to defend Synoro. I imagine that before he would not even have answered the question.

The new recruit looks interesting and is as you would expect. I would be interested to see how women are treated in the unit. Are they treated differently, or are they just another soldier?

Well done chapter. Quite a few missing words though. I don't know if that was a computer error or human error but either way, keep up the consistency with uploading chapters. Love this story.

Hmm, poor S-Man, he's really a lost fish out of water isn't he? Will he escape and join the Alliance?

Love it Keep it up !

You're doing a stellar job writing this story (minor mistakes aside). :-) Its also a terrible advert for the armed forces! Perhaps S-Man can leave the military and find happiness as a civilian (though that's unlikely, with the Inquisitor in the picture). Still, he needs an exit plan fast!

Nice. Keep it up!