I love this. As a Dragon Ball fan, I really freaking this. And I absolutely love it when I come across stories that have things about Saiyan Biology; even if most of it is just head-cannons. It makes me giddy and gives me ideas for my own personal head-cannons. I love the way you portrayed Vegeta in this story, as well as the fact that he cares about his son and family; even though he isn't always the best in showing it.

Damn. This was really, really good.

Oh damn. that was intense and brilliant. whether a humorous fic or a serious one is written about Trunks going through puberty, with Vegeta handling it always come out excellent and honest. love this. I felt myself getting misty eyed reading this.

Amazing fic about puberty! :)

Vegeta and Trunks are the best under your hands! The last part I cant help but AWW out loud! Well done :D

I just love these kind of stories! :) I hate Bra. She serves no purpose in DBZ and is a spoilt brat...At least Pan serves a purpose

Naturally, Saiyan puberty has to be violent.

Oh my God! This is the sweetest Vegeta and Trunks story I have ever read! Why doesn't it have a million favorites?!

Ah, I love father-son family fics! This was so touching and well written Bravo!

Aww! I loved this! It was so cute! Especially because I thought that Vegeta was going to beat the living crap out of Trunks for having an attitude. Lol

very cooool n.n

one of the best stories on here, shame it's a oneshot but I'm sure your later work will be as good you're a good writer

kudos

Aww

Both are perfectly in character,very well written.