| Reviews for United against the Legion of Flames (Redux) |
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ahurtrojo1 chapter 48 . 6/13/2019 Man please update soon. I love your fic. |
Gotts chapter 48 . 1/23/2019 So Orihime death was beyond stupid and I still don't see the point. even after 6 chapter we still don't know why the hell it was important for her to die... plus you stop writing this story... what a pointless death. |
Guest chapter 48 . 1/3/2019 Not feeling this. You say you don't want to downplay but you keep having OC wow characters beat and overpower opponents who can break the sound barrier and destroy buildings with their seals on... And this is EOS bleach. The fact that five random dragons post cataclysm were able to contend with yhawch better than Yamamoto and Ichigo proves that you are letting your wow love get the better of you The fact that you killed orihime and then had her forgotten to offset a few OCs that honestly should of died sooner makes it worst. Then you had almost every interaction with the bleach side be them coming in kicking ass,saving people,always getting away just makes no sense. Their condescending "I'm better,smarter and more righeteous" than you attitude got so annoying I had to stop myself from just dropping it. I can see why after 6 years this story has so little follows/reviews. I liked your bleach story but dude. You need to go read up on bleach more or at least stop trying to nerf them so much in every story you do. I mean damn, grimmjow first fight has him making mach cones. |
Arthanos chapter 48 . 6/11/2018 Awesome story. Damn that cliffhanger. Please update soon. |
gauridbirder chapter 48 . 4/21/2018 I came across this story after I finished with Transcendence. Once again I have to say, the story is very awesome ! The pace with which events occur feels perfect ! Also, I wish for your father's speedy recovery. I have a few questions btw. 1) what happened with those who had come with Draga? Raralas and Mojin didn't survive but what about Carmila and the others? 2) Orihime is one of my favorite characters but I was curious when u got her killed because that is something which is rarely done in any story. But I felt that the circumstances surrounding her death were not satisfactory. She's one of the main characters and she was just left to die. Also, her topic seems to have been ignored. Her body was brought to Garadar many chapters back and hasn't been mentioned since. U can't really keep a body like that for long time :p Also, I guess Ichigo should have been informed or at least Tatsuki but nothing happened about it. These things make the story feel stuck in some places. There are also a few grammatical errors scattered here and there which can be avoided. Keep the good work. All the best ! :D |
Axcel chapter 2 . 11/9/2017 Azeroth's nations are ruled by either corporations (Goblins), oligarchy (basically the clan head families of the Tauren and Tribe head families of the Trolls), absolute monarchy (basically everyone but the Goblins and Night Elves), magocracy (Dalaran), or theocracy (Night Elves). They have no place to say anything even resembling bad about anyone ruled by a few individuals or a handful of individuals more powerful than everyone else. Especially about a world in which there are faaar more of those individuals than there are amongst Azeroth's species. And all of these species are guilty of consistently performing atrocities against each other for decades. Unlike Earth humans. For merely existing whereas at least Earth humans have the excuse of seeking resources to better the lives of their families or genuinely believing some group or other is a bunch of traitors or actively backstabbing them. On Earth, politicians and leaders and owners of powerful corporations are arrested when they are proven to have broken the law. On Azeroth, those are the people who decide what counts as breaking the law in the first place and would have you executed for trying to arrest them for any reason. Plus, you believe there are only a few good things about modern humanity (or perhaps humanity in general) despite the real fact that there are a few (albeit, far-reaching) bad things and everything else is either neutral or (mostly) good. The good radically outweighs the bad but humans find it very difficult to see the good they do and the good around them and that other people do. They say "I and the people I know are good people who do good things" and all of the people you know think the same and those people they know think the same and so and so forth until nearly every human being in existence is thinking it and they are all correct. While simultaneously thinking "everyone but me and the people I know are less good or outright bad". |
Axcel chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 Wait, why is he a commander if he commands a fleet and why is that draenei an admiral if she does not command the fleet? A commander commands an escort ship or acts as an executive officer. Admirals command fleets, except for Rear Admirals whom handle logistics and other rear stuff to gain experience at commanding on such a large scale. |
SilentXD7 chapter 15 . 11/8/2017 Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story. If there are going to pairings in this story then I honestly hope there won't be any ichihime in this story since I'm getting sick of tired of Ichigo paired with the same girls when reading plus I want something unique. |
SentinelPrimeKnightOfCybertron chapter 48 . 8/31/2017 I have read this story from start to this stopping point and I must say I am very impressed and have thoroughly enjoyed a lot of the things you've done with this story. The chapters through the Seireitei invasion flowed excellently with both sides, Warcraft and Bleach getting to shine. Post the Seiretei Invasion, this story seems to be developing some of the same flaws as the original Bleach. These all relate to items that have over stretched the story and delayed the plot. One: Too many new characters crowding out older ones. These last chapters introduced a number of new characters that made the problem worse. I understand the need to fill in gaps, but I can barely keep track of who's who outside the regular Bleach cast which is already massive. It's bloating the story out of hand, since the constant swell of character introductions and new power ups pad out the story to the point I'm just skimming through. And the characters I like get short charged. Tatsuki was mentioned to have a larger role a few hundred words ago which I looked forward to since she was a good character that never get the attention she deserved. However she hasn't shown up since, indefinitely delayed by everything else dominating the story. You don't need to over crowd the story. Two: Filler. The Hueco Mundo Arc took far to long to decide anything and the fights scene dragged it out even longer. Half of it was blocked up by new characters. These last three chapters feel extraneous and irrelevant to the greater plot line so far. The Requiem arc is something that could have been cut or trimmed down exponentially without affecting the main conflict between the Quincies and the Shinigami. With three factions already in play, and the Burning Legion out there, a fourth new group feels excessive. Part of the enjoyment of a crossover is seeing characters you like from different franchises interact and that's lost with a gang of unfamiliar OCs. Understand, I have really enjoyed much of your work. You are a fantastic writer when it comes to character interactions and detail. However you still have room to grow and improve. I look forward to reading your next installment and wish you the best in all your future endeavors. |
Shadowwolf1997 chapter 3 . 6/4/2017 Hey Jared ya don't like it don't read it but don't flame for no good reason |
Jared51 chapter 27 . 5/30/2017 Ichigo is weak you stupid piece of shit |
Mythfan chapter 48 . 5/7/2017 Hope it's soon. Don't gamble. |
Guest chapter 48 . 5/6/2017 holy crap that much money for art? forget that man, there are much more important things you can use it for then with some lousy pictures. And with things are with your life I think it would be better to sort through those things first then worrying over your story here. I mean yeah sure ppl enjoy it but I don't think it's worth it if you is making things worst for your life. I hope things get better for you in life man, cheers to you. |
Shadowwolf1997 chapter 48 . 5/6/2017 Great chapter man |
Leapinglemur chapter 47 . 2/27/2017 Politics, the greatest obstacle to unity and progress since the beginning of time. I do hope that most of Requiem manage to get out alright, and that a few more Quincy are put in the ground. Always great to have Xrach in a chapter, such a lovable asshole he is. |