this story was really good, thank you for sharing x

Awww! I love it! That curve ball with Cade being a Maximal was fantastic! And Jazz being his trouble-magnet self so flawlessly! I swear no one else could get into as much trouble as he does.

And that lovely banter at the end!

Thank you for writing!

Do you plan on posting arc 2 any time soon? I'd love to read more of this.

Oooh. This is a really interesting take on Cybertron - and on Jazz and 'Cade'. I love the characterisation you put into this, and the twists and turns it took along the way. You made the war, and the world it's destroying, very real, and kept the tension high throughout.

This is a fascinating 'verse and I look forward to reading more of it.

Hey, I just wanted to say I thought that this story was pretty awesome and I think you wrote it very well. I was wondering if this was abandoned or if I can watch and hope for more in the future, because I would not be opposed to reading more. Either way, great work!

I can't wait for the next installment. With a writer like you, I do not expect that you will post anything less than perfect, and I respect that. However, that doesn't make me stop hoping that it comes soon. Fantastic job, and have an amazing day.

This is wonderful, truly, and I can't wait for what's to come.

Great story! :D Can't wait for the second part!

Gosh, it's over already? I was kind of expecting for Prowl to pop up at the end and say something, but I'm actually really glad you did it this way. I'm assuming that Cade's an OC, and I really like his character. Perhaps a sequel with him and Jazz? That'd be cool.

Very cute banter guys! Jazz was so sad to wake up alone. It all had almost seemed a dream, but he survived and to do so took help. So he starts looking for his catbot...and finds him )

They made friends in spite of almost killing each other...good progress!

Eager for arc 2 whenever you are ready )

D'awww, that was a very sweet ending. I really like these two, and can't wait for more developments. So, I wonder just who it was that sent Cade if not even Ratchet knows about him?

Great chapter, especially loved Jazz waking up and having that very creative energon drip (and the medics thinking he is SO resourceful). I am thinking Jazz is going to learn a lot from Cade.

This was definitely intriguing. I will certainly be looking for the next.

*shakes her head fondly* Haha, oh you two. I'm glad Jazz is back and safe. I do hope they meet again. I'm quite fond of the Maximal race.

A maximal? AWESOME! :D

I hope they see each other again soon! I'm looking forward to the next arc.