Very poorly written and rushed, Miranda and Shepard just come across as dumb teenagers who can't makeup there minds anything and not as a believable couple at all...

Ah, Matt. One of my very favorite Shepards. And your Miranda! You were always perfect at capturing her quintessential blend of pragmatism and sentimentality. Nicely done.

That was really cute. Nice work, although I'm wondering when you're ever going to continue the original story.

I love it. Do you plan to continue this? You could definitely take it somewhere.

Very nice. Definitely a better love story than Twilight.

Another decent story. I thought it was a bit better then your 'return to normal' story.

Excellent short. Glad you are writing Miranda/Shepard again. Would not mind seeing some stories with Miranda/Liara also. Looking forward to more from you.

I am so goddamned glad you are writing shep/miri again. You always manage to strike at the very center, the most engaging aspects of that romance.

For me, marriage between Shepard and miranda always seemed to be a strangely arbitrary goal. This story hasn't exactly changed my mind, but it has thrown the other side of the argument into sharp relief.