You seriously need to come back to this story. It's been 2 years & I'm still waiting for a new chapter.

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Paige is a useless whitelighter :-D But atleast you got an explanation of her charge being invovled with warlocks now for the reason of his bashing Paige. Nice to see Paige and Henry moving forward in their relationship.

Phoebe's astral premonitions powers kicked all kind of ass here. This is the kind of stuff we should've seen in season 8. Okay season 5 to 8 since it was introduced in season 5. But all we got was Phoebe visiting the future to be assured she'll get her future daughter *sigh*

Annyways, never suspected the reason Phoebe was so at peace with everything suddenly, especially seeing Cole again(not to mention prodding Paige to go with Henry) was because she already lived it and settled things with Cole in a mature manner :-) Heh and then her note mentioning Paige :-D

Besides the fantastic use of Phoebe's powers, Prue's handwriting in the Book about Charon the soul collector and she being the one possibly responsible for everything and wanting Charmed Ones souls...awesome!

As usual, I'm gonna end with update ASAP! :-)

I love this chapter, is like a real episode of Charmed, i love Cole and the conversation between them.

I almost forgot about the Soul collector and the episode with Alcatraz.

welcome back, I had to re-read ch 8 to make sure I was ready for this one :) great job, really

Yes! I love Cole! I hope he comes back for good. And plz let Phoebe be nice to him

"It's not just the words, Paige. You have to read a familiar's facial expression, body language, the intonation in their voice, the size of their eyes… Those are just a few of the signs that you need to read in order to understand a cat."

I don't know why people think I'm crazy when I tell them that about cats. But that's a rant for another time.

I felt like you really channeled Piper here. Little banter between Leo and Piper about Chris first word was cute. Now why couldn't we have that instead of the same old bickering and marriage counseling? Baby Chris needed to be acknowledged too. I mean the poor kid didn't even have a birthday party but Wyatt got two. Glad he wasn't sleeping throughout in your version.

And Paige got a social worker job! In season 8 I vaguely recall she was about to go for an interview but Sam came out of nowhere and was like 'what's the need for a job? You're a whitelighter,' throughout the episode. Glad you fixed that also.

You know after rewatch I think I enjoyed Payback is a Witch episode so if you plan to put Paige and Henry in such a situation, I'll be okay with it :-)

Ooh Cole finally...or hopefully? You know there's another character which really needed a comeback or even a brief appearance somehow. It was season 8's biggest disappointment that you have a last season you have time travel you have everybody else guest star, but no Prue or even a picture of Prue, big or Little Prue :-(

Anyways enough for now as usual update ASAP!

Wonderful as always. I wonder what will happen next.

welcome back, don't take such a long break next time :) great job love the Tilly character and that Chris thinks she is a puppy. I actually know two cats who are named "Puppy", I don't know why, so don't ask... :)

This should be interesting

love the chapter hope you bring Susan and Katrina back for future chapters will phoebe be able
to summon Cole from the wasteland or do they need the power of three to do that please write more

I actually really like this story, good work!

First of all...YOU MADE PHOEBE QUIT HER JOB!? And came up with an awesome explanation of how she suddenly became famous. Consequence of a spell :-D Wonder what she'll do. Well I wonder what everyone will do since the club was also sold. Heh. The beginning scene made me think that I clicked on the wrong story. Nice parallel. Poor Rob.

And that's what the demonic power was for...that was a nice action packed chapter with the Phoenix witches. And also appearance of Little Bianca and her Mom was a nice touch. Other highlights were Paige being linked to Leo feeling his pain and Paige pointing out Piper's shoot first ask questions later attitude. Wonder if you're foreboding to something? And who exactly is the powerful she-demon? Someone from previous seasons? And you're going to bring back Cole?! AWESOME! Anyways enough of my rants, hope to see an update ASAP!

good job, welcome back, action packed for sure.

Good chapter, i wonder who is she?. I hope we see Cole soon