| Reviews for Loud as Hope |
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   groovymumma chapter 8 . 1/28/2014 I've just been re reading some of your Newsroom stories and I wanted to say how much I enjoy them. You write will and mac so well. I hope you will have something new for is soon! |
| Tripple-A-Plus chapter 8 . 10/7/2013 I really love it. Thank you. |
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 8 . 8/23/2013 Great job showing Will's emotions here ... you'd think it should be easy to let everything go back to normal once they caught the guy, but when you've spent so much time obsessively worrying over something like this, it's definitely hard to let that go. |
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 7 . 8/23/2013 I could definitely see Mac making some casual remark about being glad it all happened, and I like Will's reaction a lot. I'm sure they would have figured things out between them EVENTUALLY, and I like how adamant he is that he can't be glad it happened, no matter how happy they are now. |
| Tccon chapter 8 . 8/21/2013 "TIhe Wife and "I . . . Love it. Will finally decided to live . . . Great story. Love your writing. I hope out consider writing more! Thanks for the entertainment! |
| Neecie2023 chapter 8 . 8/21/2013 Great story! I only wish you would have detailed the proposal ;o) |
| iworkwithpens chapter 7 . 8/21/2013 Aww...poor Will. Still such a worried mess. I love it! And I love the way you write it...lovely and caring, but not sappy or overdone. Great stuff! And can I say, it is just sooo Will and Mac to argue over something they both want (moving in together) but don't realize until their screaming at each other?! Classic! Great chapter! |
| Tccon chapter 7 . 8/20/2013 Great chapter a usual! Will has finally become a grown up. He is able to see life as shades of grey, not black ans while. |
| im.just.better.fictionally chapter 7 . 8/20/2013 *insert sigh* please don't say this is the end... |
| writingalone chapter 7 . 8/20/2013 My favorite part of the story: "You, shush," she smiled a crooked smile at him. "I love you, Billy. A lot." |
| aoutis chapter 7 . 8/20/2013 I love this chapter. You do dialogue so well. I can see them saying these things and Will feeling these things in this situation. |
| amy0102 chapter 7 . 8/20/2013 Awww... a whole chapter of fluff thaaaaaaaank you for that :) looove it! Can't stop laughing at half-drunk Mackenzie, that thought alone is funny, just imagine how she acts when drunk :D |
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 6 . 8/17/2013 Nice job! I like how Will spends so much time trying to convince Habib that their relationship is not moving too quickly, but then he retreats because being with Mac puts her in greater danger. |
| weB3now chapter 6 . 8/16/2013 Your dialogue for Will and Mac, and even Dr. Habib, is so right on. I can visualize every scene you write. You've nailed it! Great story, can't wait to read more. |
| Everybody-Lies2 chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 Beautifully written. Great story. I really love it. I look forward to the next chapter. |
