Oh. My. God. WOW! I really hope you get back on FanFiction and continue this gem. I want to see more of Laxus and Lucy! Not my OTP, but I still like them together! And you are an excellent smut writer! *fans self*

Hoping you will continue this, but I understand if you don't. I will put it on my favorites list regardless. Definitely something I will reread. Bravo!

I normally don't care as much for first person writing as I do for third person, but this story is amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I have a hot dinner on a plate in front of me, but it's going cold because I can't tear my eyes away from the screen!

I only have one criticism. It's the difference between peak and peek, and seem and seam. So a peak is a summit, like the peak of a mountain. When Lucy is looking at Laxus in the shower, she is "peeking." And she traces the "seam" of his mouth, not the seem.

Otherwise good work!

More please! You're doing a great job!

It's been 5 years please come back...

Looove this story! Please please please update!

I've reread this story a ton of times over the past year. I can't get over it. I absolutely love the plot, the charters, and all the passion. I know it's been years since you've updated but please don't leave all of your readers hanging. We want an ending. Please update.

What?! Don’t stop here! Keep going! I love it!

You've ruined me I feel like nothing else I read is going to compare ugh! I really wish you would of continued I'd like to think that they work out and end up together. I really like your version of Laxus and how sweet he could be one of my favorite lines is when he tells Lucy that he hopes she never gets tired of looking at him like that. (Insterted Mira's hearts in eyes lol) thank you for sharing your time and talent with us 3

I just real it. Please continue, its so good

I'd really like to see how their relationship develops now, will you be continuing?

Damn, this story is tantalizing from start to "finish". I could like feel their passion man. Good Job. You say "To Be Continued" so Keep up the good work. Drawing the accompanying fanart for this would be a hell of a lot of fun. Again. Good Job, and Keep up the Good Work

Mooooooore please and thank you.

Please more

ok hey. i love the way you portray Laxus throughout the story, but i hate Lucy's character. I wish she could offer something more to him rather than just nervousness. I get it, he's attracted to her, but I wish we could've had a sassier Lucy whose nervous demeanor only comes out sometimes, and not all the time because I've honestly gotten sick of it. For example, when Laxus says "The view makes up for it." Lucy could've said, "Yeah I know, I had to make up for your time somehow." Or something like that. idk it was just a thought. I still really like the story though, and wanted to offer a little criticism. I love Laxus' pull, but I don't think he would stay interested in Lucy if she was just a nervous wreck the whole time. I think he would've enjoyed a challenge more. Keep writing! I'm waiting for Age of Gladiators!

Had reread this! Hope you update soon!