Reviews for The Devil Familiar of Zero
motilz chapter 3 . 5/21
y didn't he just use Temporal healing
Guest chapter 13 . 6/19/2019
Wtf is this shit
Primus2021 chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
Should have revived Henrietta as the Queen, it would have been funny...

"So you are now a Devil, my Queen, in fact." I said to Henrietta.

"Queen?" everyone asked, with Henrietta blushing at the thought of being married.
Wassa110 chapter 1 . 11/22/2018
Good idea, terrible execution. If you're going to add DxD characters, and/or elements make sure they serve a purpose beyond dying to show how cool, or powerful, or whatever Rofocol is.

Thanks,
Warryn.
FromTheUnknown chapter 5 . 7/22/2018
I liked it, but then you started throwing all this other devils and fallen angels in there
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 8 . 2/17/2018
I like the over all concept of the story but somethings annoy me just a little. One of them is the whole iPhone obsession. The other is the... nonchalant way the main character acts in the story... things need a bit of dramatization now and then. Some happy go lucky devil doesn't really have the magnatism needed for a repeat performance of it in every situation.
shadow chapter 13 . 8/1/2017
I liked the chapter!1
d chapter 12 . 6/4/2017
this chapter hade so much shit in it all your missing is the cow
Shadowflame013 chapter 2 . 3/18/2016
Pretty dark, but I like how this is going.
ShadowImageComics chapter 13 . 11/3/2015
well, that is massive cluster fuck. I can not wait to see how this unfolds.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
How could you create such filth. The protagonist was Just simply so shallow and common. Done a million times. Same in every aspect of the world. Another Justice craving imbecile whom believes in faux humanistic values.

Most of your other stories were much better than this, I guess I expected too much.
MikoCatFace chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
Well now I am curious what will happen next.
A person chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Guiche declared as he created 3 more golems

In the show he summoned Valkyries

By a friend who wants to help
Inverness chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Sorry, I can't say I liked it. It seems like you were doing everything possible to stick to the stations of canon and not deviate from the cliche duel with Guiche. Letting himself be whipped, even if he doesn't feel it, doesn't make sense. You wouldn't want Louise to get it into her head that behavior like that is allowed. It's also impossible that she wouldn't have noticed her whipping wasn't having any effect on the target. Rofocal acted like a passive doormat right up until the end.
edboy4926 chapter 13 . 6/5/2014
Awesome story
Keep on going
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