Loving it

I thought the pacing worked really well, actually - you're right; Draco isn't going to heal immediately, and I think this chapter really reflected that.
I am definitely on team Draco re: Hermione being alive. I truly believe she is and won't believe otherwise without solid evidence!
Also, the "Ron is Spiderman" bit made me laugh - that was great!

Please update! It's been months :(

Also, if Hermione has turned into that giant wolf, why is it a "he" not a "she"? I'm hoping the wolf is not really the Death Eaters' allies, and that the line about the wolf leading Harry to his death merely means literally leading Harry to Voldemort to "die", so he could get rid of the Horcrux inside him.

NOOOOOOOOOO! Cliffhanger... -sniffles-

I like the bickering part too ;p XDD

So curious re where this is going. Want to smack Ron and Luna for being stupid and not just apparating away.

Wait - what? That was awful. I loved the part with the monk, but please don't let Hermione be dead.

I love Luna. Hermione's torture was just awful. It makes sense that it would be, but still it is hard to read. I did love/hate the transition between Hermione's story and the others'.

That was awful! I'm glad their jumping out of the window plan worked. I loved Ron's cryptic words to the farmer. Cursing Voldy's timing re taking Snape with him.

That was awful! Where is Harry?

I was afraid that would happen as soon as they jumped out of the window, but Hermione had to jump the gun. Horrible that they are, in effect, prisoners in Hogwarts. Love Draco's smug attitude. Gotta go read the next chapter.

Loved Draco fighting the horcrux. So it worked a lot like a boggart, then? That makes sense. Love embrace and then the kiss! Double loved Harry showing up at the end.

How do Ron's timeline and the others match up? It seems like more time has passed for Harry, Hermione & Draco. I love seeing Ron battle with the Horcrux. Hope they can manage to meet. Hoping also for more Luna.

Nice confrontation. I like the idea that Hermione was confunded and saw what happened the last time she was confunded. So - a lot of what we thought was Snape was actually Draco. Hermione has a point that that's a little stalkerish, but Draco is right too - that he's helped her a lot without asking for anything in return. Wondering what Harry thinks about all of this. Love the patronus (and the different spells).

Love the whole scene of Draco and Hermione summoning the objects in the RoR. The childishness in their method is fantastic. So intrigued by the books Hermione was looking at. you invent great titles.