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Im sorry to read about your friend, I also hope your doing okay, and good luck with the last story.

Damn, sorry about your friend, he will always be remembered through his hard work.

Sorry about your friend yall made a good fanfiction with this story

Damn bad happened with you guys, may god bless his soul. i know how much fun it is to write together as i or i shall we are doing same. But bro i will say one thing, try to write 1 fic in honour of his memory.

My condolences and really? Naruto punishment is strengthening the Uchiha. I'm sorry, but to me, that's seems counterproductive. Naruto is the only person available to keep the balance, his only weakness in combat is killed by the Uchihas. The reason Naruto is immortal is so Kami can have him keep the balance, so to strengthen the Uchihas is, as I previous stated, counterproductive to Kami's reason, goal, intent, or whatever it's called properly.

Good story nonetheless.

A tragic end... or is it? Love how they die by the way.

the senju will pull the world into complete bliss sound like they all get stoned to hell together or The Mugen Tsukuyomi was actually a plan made by the senju

I'm sorry for you loss.

I am sorry for the loss

My condolences go out to you and his family. I don't know what kind of person he was like in reality, but I hope he died with no regrets in his heart for however he may have lived. Death is something nobody has avoided for the past millenniums, nor will anybody ever escape it. However, natural or artificial, death provides an escape from all of their pains and troubles that they might have been experiencing, and it is up to each person how to react to someone's death. Do they mourn and sulk for that person's death for years to come, or do they celebrate the life lived by them? It sounds like he died having lived a nice life, having a friend like you to come up with and share ideas and posting them for us to read. So I say do both: mourn for his death, yet celebrate the life and adventures he lived with him and his family and friends. It's the quickest and easiest way to cope.

U have my condolences and pardon my Christianity may he find joy and enlightenment on this sacred Saturday. ...

1: your figthing scenes takes to long time.

2: stop using the word nigga in author note i find it a tad rasistic, and it makes me want to stop reading and not give the story a chance at all.

Man, so much angst in these chapters with Naruto aging for so long. I wonder how many years it'd take til humans do space travel. That'd be crazy to fight aliens or Uchiha in space or something. :)

Dark and funny in one is this even legal?