Reviews for The End is Where We Start From |
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VioletErin.26 chapter 6 . 9/14/2014 awesome! :D great job on the characterization and story line :) |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/20/2014 Something is wrong with the typing in this chapter - there's a bunch of weird text that goes p class"MsoNormal" etcetera etcetera in front of each paragraph... just as an fyi |
Acae chapter 5 . 8/20/2014 Hey! My review probably doesn't mean much, but I really like your story! I think something like this night actually happen in canon, with Tony coming in to save the day last minute. And yeah, I get it with the short chapters. When I first joined ff, I could only write about 1000 words a day, but since then I've managed to write between 6000 and 7000 (very rarely, mind you, but it's happened on several occasions). So yeah, just keep practicing and you'll get there! Hope you have a great day, and good luck with your writing journey, -Acae |
Marvelgeek42 chapter 6 . 8/20/2014 Good Chapter but you seem to have a problem with the formating or something there. I'm not sure what to call it, but I think you'll see what I mean if you look again |
Death-Sama01 chapter 6 . 8/20/2014 *ptsst* your HTML is showing XD |
One-Eyed Zoro chapter 6 . 8/20/2014 Hey! Just thought is let you know all your HTML code is showing. Something must have gone wrong during the upload. |
CaptainMetal chapter 4 . 2/17/2014 I like the idea, but your chapters are too short. Good grammar and all, but they're just too short. I would enjoy these a lot more if it wasn't for that one flaw. -Capt. Metal |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/2/2014 Please update soon I wanna read more of your story can you update soon |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2013 Hope you continue this |
See Me As I Am 101 chapter 3 . 10/26/2013 Oh shit That was a mean cliffie. But please torture Capt good for me, yeah? |
ashleykhl chapter 3 . 10/26/2013 So, Fury wants Tony to build the arc reactor again? |
Sandy-wmd chapter 3 . 10/26/2013 Interesting story so far. Lots of heavy emotional stuff from everyone. I'm looking forward to further updates. |
mkeeg91 chapter 2 . 9/1/2013 Interesting so far. Can't wait to see where you take this |
ashleykhl chapter 2 . 8/24/2013 That was very sad... |
LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books chapter 2 . 8/24/2013 Yeah. Missions without Tony suck. v.v Yeah...about the under the ocean thing Tony. I hope you actually destroyed it and SCATTERED it around the bottom of the ocean. I really hope so Anthony! :D lovely chapter 2. And, take away the suit. Tony is still Iron Man. And you can never take the Iron from the man! |